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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 83)

sincereme IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 10:19am | IP Logged


I love the pace of the story...

Khushi is adorable and Arnab is slowly falling for khushi...  Love to see that he is looking forward to lead a life with his child bride and waiting for her to become a woman... There moments are beautiful...

Kahani mein twist... Pranab too is falling for khushi... But doesn't he know that she is his brother's wife?? 

Waiting to see what will happen next...

continue soon...


Edited by sincereme - 14 September 2013 at 2:29am

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Bavari Goldie

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 10:49am | IP Logged
waiting... :)
Anupama. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 10:49am | IP Logged

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I super loved that. The conversation they had in the bedroom and in the library brought a smile on my face. And the thought process, the realizations that became clear to Arnav were so sensible. M so happy that he figured it out . He took time and it came to him just as naturally. I do wish that he spends more time with her. I observed that it was the only thing that had let him think sanely, made him take considerate decisions and gave him hopes for a future. Those few lines in the library scene just won my heart.

Him playing out the song from the 'toy' for her for really sweet. I LOVED THAT SCENE.

Since, you are my friend, I'd take the chance to be honest with you about the Pranab part. Had it been any other writer, I wouldnt have mentioned it.
Its not anything much. just that my heart had dipped when I read it and I had sulked for a few minutes. :(
Later, it occured that it was but natural to occur considering it didnt surprise me. Pranab had been spending time playing, studying or just chilling around with her. An adolescent heart is obvious to get attracted.
We are emotionally attached to Arnav Khushi and I get happy to see them as forever together.
And as it pains me to think, so il put it this way that had it been any other beings, wouldnt it have been natural to think that the child bride got attracted to same aged brother in law?

But its Khushi we are talking about and Arnav. I have seen the attachment, emotional, that they have. The concern and fondness. So I think, m still at peace.

The new twist is gripping to say. It holds so many possibilities. And either way the story proceeds out of those possibilities, it 'l break one s' heart. Such an emotional its going to be ahead and Jen, I trust you completely with it.

Edited by Anupama. - 17 September 2013 at 3:42am

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hi50 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Superb update...Smile
Ohh... No... Pranab is falling for Khushi...LOLLOL..
That reminds me of a JEALOUS Arnav of course...Wink

Edited by hi50 - 13 September 2013 at 12:39pm

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Aparamegha IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 11:28am | IP Logged
"Ki Jani Kishero Lagi Prano Kore Hai hai {My absent heart does not know why  It's absolutely borne away"

It seems like both Arnab and Pranab are falling for Khushi

Arnab is waiting eagrely for his child bride to become a woman in the real sense and young Pranab is already mesmerised by the woman that Khushi is growing up into...

Another fab update..although it felt a bit short...

Please update soon...

Edited by Aparamegha - 13 September 2013 at 12:57pm

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Kishmish IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Waiting ... Day Dreaming
Loved the Khushi-Arnab moments ... 
he treats her with such gentleness ... 
and Khushi so wants to please him ... 

Trust you to bring in the biggest twist ... by making Pranab fall in love with khushi  Shocked
now what ??? hope Arnab sees his brothers budding feelings and does something 
about it ... 

Thanks Jenny ... 

Edited by Kishmish - 14 September 2013 at 2:32am

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cute_sarun IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
Please update. Soon. Dear

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