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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 82)

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 8:03am | IP Logged
shall be waiting for this for sure
oh my my
so arhi got bit closer
and am glad that he is gonna wait for her
and is gonna think twice before he says anything to her
but bit of complication here
and that would be a triangle of sorts
though i think not
just attraction for pranab
hmmm he handled that well
thank god for that
but then he would have
cant have the repeat of what he did before now can we
there is hope for them yet
unless of course something else happens that ruins things between them like their parents


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And i shall wait...waited and totally worth the wait.

ohhh what a twist Jenny so you have got little pranab into the midst of Arnab-Khushi angle...Shocked
This little twist will definitely make things very very interesting. 

Arnab who wants to wait for his wife to grow up...khushi who just wants her husband to like her...pranab khushi's best friend but who is suddenly seeing khushi in a different light.

A great complex web this is Jenny. Clap Now what will arnab babu do?  Ermmm Given the age pranab is definitely more suitable for khushi.

A great update Jen...and i am dying in anticipation to find out what lies ahead for little Mrs. Arnab babu. 


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i m putting alarm at 2 am here...cant wait till morning Ouch..

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its 2am here;)

Oh no!!!...pranab is falling for khushi...thats really badOuch now plzzz dont let arnav think that pranb is better for khushi than him...i ll cry :'(

Tagore + arhi = romance..BAS!!!
the update was sooo beautiful...ll read again in morning :)

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Jenny, this was brilliant...

I don't know where to start and what to say in fear of not doing justice to this chapter, it was perfectly perfect...

Loved how he realises that this child bride of his is such an enigma. Loved his realisation of his feelings for her and beautifully your wrote them ...right from childhood lies in the state of your mind and not in numbers to 'Yes, He liked this child, he liked this child a lot and he was looking forward to loving the woman, whose glimpses he caught in her from time to time. 
He was willing to wait for the woman in her to slowly awaken. It was just a matter of time.' 

Jenny this had got to be your best writing so far...you have got the nuances, the characters, the feelings and emotions, balancing it with the right degree of reality, the setting everything spot on...
I loved how he is sensitive to her and her feelings, realising his his every word and action has such an impact on her and her happiness had somewhere down the line become important to him too! 

I loved how he has noticed so much about her, her way of dissecting every topic till she was satisfied with the responses...I loved the scene in the library, it was so visual and so beautifully written ...Khushi with her innocence, blunt and frank at that age where she says what she feels and what comes to her mind, not weighing her words, making everything she says honest and heartfelt even though she may not understand the implication of what she says, but there are enough for him to realise the kind of person she will be growing up, her ability to to arouse these feeling in him and his eagerness to wait for her says so much about them as people...I for one cannot wait to see what is in store for them...

I loved the Pranab angle ...I thought it might happen, given their proximity, if Aranb can start developing feelings for her despite his initial reluctance then Pranab who has the advantage of age and her constant company could not help harbouring feelings for her too...
I am so looking forward to what is in store...I can sense it's going to be brilliant ! 


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