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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 7:47am | IP Logged
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Bohe kiba mridu baay..

This was such a lovely update, Jen. Just beautiful. Oh, how you make me see everything playing in front of my eyes with your words. 

The Khushi and Arnab moment was so special, so precious. This Arnab is very considerate and understanding and I love him for that. He thinks he's mature and old, but he's so young too, still figuring life out. To have a little bride at this age must be hard for him too. And yet, he has finally understood the situation and is willing to wait and willing to give a chance to a beautiful relationship in the forming.

"He liked this child, he liked this child a lot and he was looking forward to loving the woman, whose glimpses he caught in her from time to time."

#Respect!

Well if isn't miss Khushi growing up to be a beautiful woman..who obviously is unaware of her beauty. Why, even her husband sees her as beautiful, and now, brother in law too.

Somewhere, I knew Prnab would fall for Khushi. I don't know why, but I knew. But I'm not surprised. But I would love to see how he deals with it. I think he'll declare his love for her , but wouldn't want anything in return. It'll break Khushi's heart for sure, for she won't be able to do anything about it.

And and... I love that song,Jen. One of my favorite Bengali songs Smile I loved that you used it here, for one of my favourite couple. 


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For me this line,  "Childhood lies in the state of your mind, not in numbers" said it all.

Such a beautiful thought and it carries the essence of this story. Khushi a child, wants to have a child (a doll) and she doesn't even understand what sleeping with her husband means. sad state of affairs indeed. This is the reason why I go on harping about the greatness of those men and women who fought against the system to bring about those much needed changes in society and constitution.

Arnav is noticing other things about Khushi and she is a feisty one, alright. I love that about her. I'm really happy to see Arnav taking her under his wing to show her things and teach her if necessary. 

Did you know...I thought Pranab will fall in love with her. after all he does spend a lot of time with her and sees her in all moods unlike Arnav who doesnt see her as regularly...Isn't hat the natural ways of the world. I wonder how much Khushi feels for Pranab. i know this Arnav Khushi world...orelse wouldn't it be the most natural thing for Khushi to fall for Pranab too?

That was a fab update Jen...I loved the descritions of the library and the Khushi swinging and Pranab watching imagery too :)


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Ouch, that hurts Cry


But you will pakka update nahDay Dreaming 

So I will waitLOL
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Oh no, Jen! Why did Pranab have to fall for Khushi?
Now please don't let Arnav give up Khushi for his brother.
The Arnab Khushi moments were so precious.
Loved it when he made her lidten to the beautiful song.
Her fascination for the machine was so endearing.
Waiting for them to fall in love ith each other.



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Beautiful update, Jenny. And so very poetic.. the entire atmosphere so idyllic, full of nature and poetry and music and tender feelings.I now respect Arnab even more than before, when he said to himself "Wasn't nature itself supposed to slowly awaken a child's mind and nudge it gently towards adulthood? " and also  "He liked this child, he liked this child a lot and he was looking forward to loving the woman, whose glimpses he caught in her from time to time. " He is a kind and noble man, I see that now. That scene between them was so lovely and precious, I am sure it is a memory the both of them will cherish for a lifetime. 
What Pranab is feeling is only natural, after all they are growing up together, and spend a lot of their time in each other's company. Wonder how this will impact the blossoming relationship between Arnab and Khushi.

I must commend the subtlety with which you are tracing Khushi's growth and slow maturity into a woman. Gentle and so very sensitive... I myself am falling in love with this young lady Smile 

Stellar update, Jenny Big smile


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Arnab is so right when he said "Childhood lies in the state of your mind, not in numbers"...where Khushi is still a child in mind,the same aged Pranab is feeling the first sign of growing up...by falling for Khushi...I hope he realized the impossibility of the situation before things go out of hands...there's already so much complexity in developing ArShi relationship,now any more of it will be a disaster...At long last Arnab is thinking her as his bride...letting his guards down...admitting he likes her...deciding to go with the flow of nature...I am getting so hopeful...I wish they could spend time together,know each other better...but in 1920's I guess this is so much to desire...anyways,I loved the improvement in their relation today...waiting for more eagerly...


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