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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 61)

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Posted: 06 September 2013 at 2:17am | IP Logged
too good

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Aparamegha IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 September 2013 at 2:28am | IP Logged
What a reality check for Arnab. There was no age difference between his child bride that he was desperate to avoid and the "baiji" that he went for to quench his physical thirst. So glad that he stopped himself from making a greater crime. If he had done the deed I wonder whether he would even been able to look into his child bride's eyes or rather into his own.Taking into mind the era we are dealing with it was one of the most common aspect of "babu" life to have a "bibi". Not everyone however went to "baiji bari" just for sexual pleasure as you have already mentioned that era was also considered as Bengal renaissance owing to the several talent that such place had nurtured. Arnab's turmoil has been brilliantly portrayed.

Khushi is such an innocent soul. She so desperately wants to sleep with her husband because she wants to have a child herself. The way she gave up her doll, the change in her natural behaviour only for the sake of pleasing her husband clearly shows how much she craved to be a woman. Beautifully written. I had a chill down my spine when Thammi told her to let her husband come close to her and do whatever he wants to do. Gosh that was so real and so scary. Cant even imagine how scary it can he for someone who has no idea about what actually sleeping with ones husband involves.

Arnab is hoping to move out and live his life. Is there a separation coming up? I cant see him willingly taking Khushi with him.

Amidst all these loved Arnab Khushi convo. It did have some touches of marital life. The way she pointed her fingers towards him and the way he laughed hearing about the reason behind her wanting to share a room with him..all pointed towards the upcoming natural flow of relationship.

Another fantastic update.Clap

Edited by Aparamegha - 06 September 2013 at 3:35pm

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harsha.. Senior Member

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Posted: 06 September 2013 at 3:22am | IP Logged
I am glad that he didn't sleep with the girl.The whole intellectual and a man in control of his emotions kind of image you had built for Arnav would have shattered.
I love the effort and research you put into each part. The way you described the courtesans was brilliant.

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NiksAngel Senior Member

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Posted: 06 September 2013 at 7:56am | IP Logged
Awesome update...!!! Very nice...!!! thanks for the PM  Hug

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mehak06 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 September 2013 at 8:13am | IP Logged
khushi is a sweet kid
she just wants whatever is being taught to her

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dingle Senior Member

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Posted: 06 September 2013 at 9:07am | IP Logged
I think this whole thing is brilliant.  Im also sad that she gave her doll away in a misguided attempt to grow up.
I love your Khushi... her childish innocence is beuatiful to read.

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Aanchal15 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 September 2013 at 9:47am | IP Logged
Thank you for the amazing update, Jenny!!
My heart went out to Arnav..the conflict of emotions , that he was  sustaining.. the  constant retrospect of being punctilious,.. and, then, thankfully not committing that sin, for which he would be eternally.. penitent!!
Khushi's naivety is palpable and her candid confession about wanting a baby of her own, just cements the fact ...
You have left us ruminating and deliberating, now that Arnav has decided to move out of his parents' home ...Await next with eager anticipation, as usual..and, thank you for dropping the PM :-)

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sanjubanju Senior Member

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Posted: 06 September 2013 at 10:24am | IP Logged
I love Khushi here. Very nice update dear. Eager to read what will happen 

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