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hi50 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Thanks for the explanation Jenny...Smile

Will eagerly wait for the update...Day DreamingDay Dreaming

Edited by hi50 - 05 September 2013 at 11:09am

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Seethu Goldie

Joined: 23 November 2012
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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 11:21am | IP Logged

Before anything  I should say this - Jenny , what ever may be the locale or era you take us there and make us feel the entire  sorroundings  :) I'm still devouring Landour of ALS and now you are succeeding in this story too :)

Khushi is going through lot many for her age as she is now trying to get rid of her childhood to become a woman to be with her husband .. poor thing , she is not left with any other choice other than this I guess  ..
Arnab wanted to give her 14 hr old wife her childhood and he was almost about to satify his frutstration using another younger girl .. what an irony !!!

The conversation between Arnab and Khushi was sooo cute !! it brought me wide smile on my face :)

Lovely update !!! Thanks for the PM :)

PS: I don't know about what your schedule looks like but I can't wait for the next update already  Wink

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amaypranay IF-Rockerz

Joined: 01 November 2004
Posts: 6210

Posted: 05 September 2013 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Jenny..thx for your note...
Your expiations are very clear...

Very eager to see the progress of his understanding in their marriage...and his patience towards towards..Khushi!

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FeistyDewdrop Goldie

Joined: 24 October 2012
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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Hey Jenny :)
Oh God. i ws so much relieved aftr readin abt Arnavz return frm dat godforsaken plc..n i cant help bt sympathaise the pool girl's efforts in becomin a 'woman'
**sigh** isnt it to b a natural process?!
Snatching away the childhood is a sin!!! bt wot to do.. uss zamane ki baat hai aur hum paida bhi nahi huye :(
grippin story dear :)

Edited by kooldewdrop - 05 September 2013 at 11:57am

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Arjuhisis IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
thanks for the clarifications jenny

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crazydream IF-Rockerz

Joined: 30 July 2011
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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
Started reading this ff.
Liked the concept very much.
It's awesome.

Will comment after reading the 4 parts.

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opsyellow IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 16 February 2012
Posts: 10218

Posted: 05 September 2013 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
I never thought that Arnab going to that place was wrong. I want to believe that they have those places for men like Arnab who have need but sad thing is that men like Arnab dad also go there. I very happy that Arnab didn't go through with that girl because that will be so wrong for person like Arnab.
Arnab is 26 and have a wife whom he cant get any pleasure from and he is willing to wait but sometimes you cant control
desire and you can blame Arnab behaving like a human.
Sad thing is you cant blame the society either because the time was like that! Because now we call it child marriage is illegal and those people pedophiles does change anything because that time they did was normal.
I think my mom got married when she was 16 or 17 and my grandma got married when she was only 12! The time differents was from 1920 to 1960 0r 70 I guess but there was no big difference. Changes came very slowly with the society and people was just following it.
Wonderful story.

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tanvia IF-Dazzler

Joined: 22 April 2012
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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 12:28pm | IP Logged was great..
so thoroughly written..

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