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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 54)

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Posted: 06 September 2013 at 12:06am | IP Logged


I just read all the four chapters of this story and I want to tell you that you have found yourself a new pestering reader. Best of luck :D

This story is a period drama, my MOST favorite genre and then it is coming of age story of two people, my next fav genre. So all in all I am hooked and am looking forward to more. 

This would be my first time following your work and I am so glad you are writing this piece. I have heard only good things about you :)

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Posted: 06 September 2013 at 12:13am | IP Logged
the i agree with ur facts dear...
and thnks for the note dear...

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Posted: 06 September 2013 at 12:44am | IP Logged

Get your point dear...

Thanks...Smile

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Posted: 06 September 2013 at 1:30am | IP Logged


Finished reading the 4 parts.
I don't know wat to say, how to express
After reading this. Have cum across this
Type of historic concept for first time n
U made me spellbound.

Arnab a Man of principle n high thinking.
His theories are modern which is disliked
By his father.

Arnabji's Khushi. Liked her child like innocence.
Her antics, her way of speaking, her vivid expressions
Are sweet n I like it very much.

Khushi transforming into a woman. Indeed a
Difficult task for a child. Her childhood is being
Snatched away. I hope Arnab tries his best to retain
It. It will be only possible If he lmoves out with her.

Khushi attempts to be a woman. Arnab llaughing
His heart out hearing her answer. She wants a baby !!

Hope u be able to keep Khushi's innocence,
the way she Talks.

Continue soon.

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Posted: 06 September 2013 at 2:28am | IP Logged
What a reality check for Arnab. There was no age difference between his child bride that he was desperate to avoid and the "baiji" that he went for to quench his physical thirst. So glad that he stopped himself from making a greater crime. If he had done the deed I wonder whether he would even been able to look into his child bride's eyes or rather into his own.Taking into mind the era we are dealing with it was one of the most common aspect of "babu" life to have a "bibi". Not everyone however went to "baiji bari" just for sexual pleasure as you have already mentioned that era was also considered as Bengal renaissance owing to the several talent that such place had nurtured. Arnab's turmoil has been brilliantly portrayed.

Khushi is such an innocent soul. She so desperately wants to sleep with her husband because she wants to have a child herself. The way she gave up her doll, the change in her natural behaviour only for the sake of pleasing her husband clearly shows how much she craved to be a woman. Beautifully written. I had a chill down my spine when Thammi told her to let her husband come close to her and do whatever he wants to do. Gosh that was so real and so scary. Cant even imagine how scary it can he for someone who has no idea about what actually sleeping with ones husband involves.

Arnab is hoping to move out and live his life. Is there a separation coming up? I cant see him willingly taking Khushi with him.

Amidst all these loved Arnab Khushi convo. It did have some touches of marital life. The way she pointed her fingers towards him and the way he laughed hearing about the reason behind her wanting to share a room with him..all pointed towards the upcoming natural flow of relationship.

Another fantastic update.Clap


Edited by Aparamegha - 06 September 2013 at 3:35pm

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Posted: 06 September 2013 at 3:22am | IP Logged
I am glad that he didn't sleep with the girl.The whole intellectual and a man in control of his emotions kind of image you had built for Arnav would have shattered.
I love the effort and research you put into each part. The way you described the courtesans was brilliant.


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Posted: 06 September 2013 at 7:56am | IP Logged
Awesome update...!!! Very nice...!!! thanks for the PM  Hug

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khushi is a sweet kid
she just wants whatever is being taught to her

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