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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 50)

bkamber IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM

Loved the Chapter.

waiting for the next one.

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devasahayam Senior Member

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
awesome update

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rati123 Goldie

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
Such a beautiful story !! You have brought that era to life, literally !!
Poor Arnab and Khushi , both are victims of the practices of that era. And Khushi's innocence and cute determination have such an underlying pathos to it. Poor thing does'nt even know what she is asking for. God ! Her friend a mother at 14 !!!!
I am glad she has Arnab as her husband.

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sohara IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
Amazing, amazing, amazing!
your writing is always a treat for me.
Thanks for the clarification Jenny.
 I knew he wouldn't do it. where he hates paedophilla then how he can do it! 
he didn't want to see the face of the harlot. But how God can be unjustified to Khushi. So he made him saw the face of the 13 years old harlot, before the damage would've done.

Poor Khushi has been trying so hard to please her husband. But she doesn't have any idea what her husband wants. 
i can understand Arnav's frustration, his anger. It was not on Khushi, but for the society, for his parents and for himself as well. But when he saw the distinctive change in Khushi he tried to be affable to her. he was flummoxed to see, Khushi even abandoned her favorite doll to grow up as a woman. 
Their conversation was so sublime! I guess for the first time they talked like a friend. It was the best moment when she said that she wants to sleep with him to get a baby. Her innocent candor amused young Arnab.
 A sweet love is about to bloom between them.

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..Jyoti.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 11:40pm | IP Logged
Awww Khushi is so innocent
beautiful update
continue soon

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nhrb Senior Member

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 11:42pm | IP Logged
awesome update. loved it.

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DMGFan-2b-not2b IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
Rather tragic isnt it? What all a woman is forced to do and endure in the name of family, marriage, art etc.

Be it a 13 year old courtesan who is forced to learn the art of wooing and entrancing a man and sleeping with him to satisfy his carnal desires and be an object of HIS satisfaction...

...or be a 14 year old girl trying to come to terms with being rendered an orphan, trying to win the love of your husband and his acceptance...

Clearly Khushi has made a place for herself in Arnav's heart - how much and to what extent remains to be seen! Maybe this is the start of a friendship between the two and the best basis for any relationship is friendship! 

But I wonder, if Arnav does rent his own place, will Khushi be in for more heartbreak as he refuses to take her with him or would family force her to go with him paving the way for a deeper and meaningful relationship to develop between the two?

I think of all that you have written so far, this story is by far the best!

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 04 September 2013 at 11:55pm

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star_fan1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
Finallly you updated after so long
Loved the update especially the last part Smile
Poor Khushi, she's such an innocent
Khushi thought that she can have a real baby to play rather than her lifeless doll
I am glad they are talking again to each other
Love how honest Khushi is with him
The ending conversation is very cute
Even I laughed when khushi told arnav that she wants a babyLOL
Khushi's innocence and Arnav's restlessness is very beautifully writtenClap
Hope soon Arnav will accept Khushi in his life Day Dreaming
Thanks for such a lovely and beautiful update

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