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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 43)

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 2:08pm | IP Logged
Addendum:
Judging by the first few comments, I think I should have made it more clear that he didn't do it...
I LOVE U,JENNY !!!!!

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 2:19pm | IP Logged
awesome updt

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
awesome

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
Just fantastic and a smooth update. You hold every part beautifully. Be it arnav or Khushi going through that night. 
 That sweet innocent girl is trying to understand important part of life but her innocent mind is not able to get the depth of it.
I was thinking about Khushi and 13 year girl in  proctitute  house, that gril was also innocent but life taught her harsh reality of the life and she is forced to face that in that tender age
Thank god arnav saw that girl and he didn't do anything with her otherwise he will not be able to forgive himself for ever.
It's so cute and innocent thought of Khushi that she can have a real baby to play rather than her lifeless doll. Poor girl can't think what it takes to have a baby. She wants to become woman as soon as possible, and she is working hard for it. What will be her reaction when she will learn the actual meaning of it.
Wonderful update. Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 2:44pm | IP Logged
nice part.poor khushi hope arnav will accept khushi in his life soon.

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
Beautiful update! Khushi's innocence and Arnab's restlessness is very well written...The ending conversation is very cute...Enjoyed it a lot!

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
OMG! That was really cute! Even I laughed when khushi told arnav that she wants a baby!!!! Beautiful update! Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 3:22pm | IP Logged
Updated in RED @page 38..

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