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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 42)

lilakumariacnw Goldie

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 7:47pm | IP Logged
Lovelyupdate jenny...
Omg...what an irony...the. dancer is a kid... I didnt like his conduct..
Feeling bad for khushi...
So atlast ...atleast he searched for khushi...
Loved their conversation...

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AquaSandhya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 7:47pm | IP Logged
Comment updated on page 32Smile

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hello87_11 Senior Member

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 7:50pm | IP Logged
great update! aww glad that khushi was able to make arnab smile a little!:) 

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sakthi25 Senior Member

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 7:53pm | IP Logged
Loved the Update... 
Khushi tries hard to become a woman...

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mrin0709 Goldie

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 7:59pm | IP Logged
Most amazing concept i ever came across...

Loved it!!!

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seeta_naips IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:13pm | IP Logged
so he went to a courtesan only to find out she was even younger than Khushi and he left there

cant wait for her to be all grown up

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Panther007 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:26pm | IP Logged
amazing update jenny...ClapClap

my heart goes to khushi when how innocently ask thammi how 2 became a woman..poor girl..
da circumstances nd arnab's rudeness  forced him 2 kill her childhood nd wanted 2 b a woman as soon as possible..for dat she also gave her doll to gardener's daughter...felt really bad for her..

glad dat arnav didnt slept with dat girl...dat girls was only 13 yr could he sleep with her when he himself become rude nd hurt her  14 yrs wife as for him she was still child nd young...
arnav wanted 2 b away fro his father..for dat he searching for a he gonna take khushi with him or arnab babu now restless as why khushi avoiding him...

so khushi was prepared herself 2 became a woman nd wanted a live doll for herself..happy dat arnab apolized for his behaviour 2 innocently khushi said dat she want a baby nd for dat she has to b stay with him..glad dat atleast this  bring smile on his face...

by reading dis update i just thought abt da girls of dat much dey had  2 gone through..da society nd da der family forcrd her 2 become a woman at her tendr age by killing her childhood nd innocence nd der is on one to whom dey complain abt it...sochne pe he rona ajata haiCryCry

what more i cn say jenny..with your awsum writing u always make me speechless nd im always  short of  love every bit of it...

luking forward for wht gonna happen nxt..
continue soonBig smile

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Raila1014 Goldie

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:34pm | IP Logged
Great update!  I love that era, always fascinated me.  Your little tidbit on the courtesan was very nice, reminded me of Pakeeza.  Really glad he did not 'cheat ' on her even though to him, she is a child he needs to stay away from.  He must have felt awful when he realized the person he was trying to use to get rid of his pent up frustrations was also a teen like the one he was running away from.  Their interaction at the end is beautiful, her gullibility and his reaction to her response.  Beautiful.

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