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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 37)

aaradhaya1688 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
This chapter was adorable
Thank god he didn't do it that too with a 13 year old
kushi is just so lnnocent now when will she grow up literally
I can't wait to see them falling in lovelnnocentd
Thanks for the pm dear Smile

Edited by aaradhaya1688 - 04 September 2013 at 1:55pm

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amaypranay IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
Jenny...this one is also turning out to be awesome!

So a diff Ira...

I wish Arnav takes Khushi with him..once he moves...she's his responsibility and she should be with him...

The ending was just marvelous ...too good..Jenny!

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sakhter90 Goldie

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
Wonderful update! I'm so glad that he didn't do it! Awww khushi Is having to grow up fast! All this for a baby!

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archmink Goldie

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
aahhh you hve brought a humor in a otherwise what would have been a very serious and delicate situation ..
'' I want a child '' ... had me also laughing throwing my head back ..
whatever his argument with himself was for going to that place ... but it did gave him a reality ck when it came down to an act... and thanks a lot to khushi's god and her luck that her faith didn't turn out to be one like her mother-in-law ... 
aahh so she is all set to become a woman now and yes also a mother too

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l.savitree IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
That was a perfectly well written it
thanks for pm & eagerly want to read more

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pakpearl IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 2:08pm | IP Logged
Judging by the first few comments, I think I should have made it more clear that he didn't do it...

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archnahardik123 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
Just fantastic and a smooth update. You hold every part beautifully. Be it arnav or Khushi going through that night. 
 That sweet innocent girl is trying to understand important part of life but her innocent mind is not able to get the depth of it.
I was thinking about Khushi and 13 year girl in  proctitute  house, that gril was also innocent but life taught her harsh reality of the life and she is forced to face that in that tender age
Thank god arnav saw that girl and he didn't do anything with her otherwise he will not be able to forgive himself for ever.
It's so cute and innocent thought of Khushi that she can have a real baby to play rather than her lifeless doll. Poor girl can't think what it takes to have a baby. She wants to become woman as soon as possible, and she is working hard for it. What will be her reaction when she will learn the actual meaning of it.
Wonderful update. Thanks for the pm.

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Asrkkgsr Goldie

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 2:44pm | IP Logged
nice part.poor khushi hope arnav will accept khushi in his life soon.

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