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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 34)

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
wow super update.
 cnt digest the fact that arnav went to othr woman. bt i love the way u write such parts. khushi is changing. waiting to c how arnav will react

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
Khushi gave her doll away voluntarily so that she could become a woman.
Arnav went to brothel to give himself a relief.. why sudden urge after he had a little tiff with Khushi..and to save Khushi's childhood.. but the girl he would have used was even younger than Khushi and irony of the situation really hit him hard and he felt disgusted with himself.
Khushi is so sweet and innocent and she has decided to become a woman as she would rather have a baby instead of a doll and when asked she told Arnav and he could't believe what he heard and laughed the way he has't for a long time.
Jenny that was unbelievably wonderful and I am in awe that how you have written this timeless tale in a amazingly beautiful manner.
I feel that I have been waiting forever for this chapter. Please continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Superb part.

Thanks for PM.

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
Oh Jenny - thx for the super duper update
Ur addendum made me super happy - love u dear

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
lovd it..sooo cute khushi...
poor girl.cant wait for next part

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
that was cute update

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
fantastic update.
and like this line most "Thammi has forgotten to mention just how painful growing up can be..." 

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
Well at least I am glad they are talking again to each other!! Love how honest Khushi is with him,  something that might Change as the years go on!!!

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