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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 33)

vgedin IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:16am | IP Logged
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Jenny, I am now confused about my own feelings.. on one hand I hate to see Khushi having to grow up so fast.. sacrifice what she holds so dear. She should be worried about dolls and games, instead she is having to worry about pleasing her husband. But on the other hand, I see that the girl is in fact growing. I want her husband to notice her, I want her to take his breath away. I don't even know what is right to think and what isn't.. but such is the beauty of your story. One can see the bright and the dark aspects on both sides. 
So glad Arnav didn't sleep with the courtesan. However, it did pinch - the fact he stopped only because that woman was a child herself, and not because he felt like he was cheating on his wife. Well... such was that age. Fidelity was nonexistent in the moral code for the men of those times, isn't it ? Sigh.. 

She wants a baby to replace her doll? I don't know whether to laugh or cry.. Arnav is an honorable man at the end of the day and I hope he will be a good and kind husband to Khushi. He wants to move out? That is good, might help him get over his frustrations and helplessness. But I do hope he won't leave his wife behind? 

I am enjoying the way you are weaving this story.. the history, the culture, the characters and the plotting. Stunning Smile 

Edited by vgedin - 04 September 2013 at 10:39pm

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Anarocksick IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:17am | IP Logged


I understand your need to put up the note...although it's all but clear. it's so easy to see that arnab is simply different from the men of his age and time.
At the back of my mind, I knew arnab wouldn't go ahead and cheat on his wife, but such was the period that even if he had gone ahead and done it, I wouldn't have been surprised. A little hurt, yes. But to think of it, it couldn't even be called cheating as per say... Men of that time... They just did it as if it were something to do. It was something they had seen their fathers and friends do. So yes, while it can't be called cheating, a few people were always hurt along the way.

Poor Khushi. She makes me cry for her and then she makes me laugh! How innocent she is still. She wants a baby to replace her doll LOL
I simply love your Khushi. She's so brave and frank. I like how she never hides things. Her sufferings would have increased that way. I like how she shares everything with thammi and never fears opening up to her husband.

I feel arnab won't take Khushi along. But then, I can't be sure.

The last scene was lovely, Jen. Very lovely. Left me grinning. Just cannot wait for the next part.

A very well researched story this is. I want this to be a movie! Something like parineeta, you know? :-D

Edited by Anarocksick - 07 September 2013 at 12:35am

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dieforasr IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:18am | IP Logged
thank God...he didn't do it..Embarrassed Ur writing reminds me S .C chattopadhya's stories...Especially Parineeta...Lalita was only 13...In his every story female protagonists were just like that...loved all of them...thanx to bring back the memories of those innocent loves...Big smile

Edited by dieforasr - 04 September 2013 at 10:12pm

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toeditor Goldie

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:32am | IP Logged

Beautiful chapter Jenny...good that arnav has this conversation with khushi...her innocence is beautifully written...waiting for next update...

Edited by toeditor - 04 September 2013 at 2:24pm

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:34am | IP Logged
Big smile
Sorry comment on pg 45!
Beautiful chapter!
Waiting for next one!

Edited by opsyellow - 04 September 2013 at 4:14pm

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finally waiting

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