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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
i want a proper redemption of arnav for going brothel...that para broke my heart..my eyes became moist...i want him to pay...
i know this kind of behaviour was normal back then but its really hard to except ...arnav did that too.
i love that arnav who promised khushi a secure future not this arnav. i hav only loathing for this arnav.
till the last update, i thought he ll go to the brothal but wont step inside it. he ll get some sense. he ll b responsible...but no!!
do arnav has any idea, how much his doing broke my heart????? i m literally crying now!!! that para affected me sooo badly. i cant bliv i started liking THIS arnav????

laughing at khushi's innocence wont work. he has broken his promise. now he HAS to pay...BAS

Jenny...u hav no idea, how much this chapter broke my heart!!! though the baby wala part was funny but i just cant bring myself to like this arnav again.

can plzzz do something so that i can love this arnav again????? he ll suffer...right??? there ll b redemption...right????
i dont want to hate this arnav sooo much but i cant love him either.

i donno if u r planning for a happy ending or sad ending...i want arnav to pay...BAS!

i know m being silly...but I AM WAITING FOR UR ANSWER SOON JENNY...DESPERATLY! :((((

this chapter...touched my heart,...broke my heart...made me cry!
only u can do this jenny...AMAZING UPDATE.
Aab answer de dooEmbarrassed can i get a answer soonish...plzzz or else i ll read this chap again n then cry cry n cry buckets :'(

NO OTHER FF affected me sooo much the way this one didConfused hats off...

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Fabuloud jenny
Loved it.
Do continie soon plz

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
Awsommmiiieee loads happnd in khushi...shez growing up...arnab apolygizd well he sud...he laughd at hr rply on baby well letz c whtz all store in out lil bride khushi & hr arnab ke liye...mwahz jenny di glad u r finly back was so waiting 4 u...nxt chp sooon..:)

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
Jen...honestly i am still trying hard to get used to the scenario of this story..it is as same of the Arnsv Mohini type in TIH..u know i dont actually like the fact of Arshi being dragged to older times..
For me they r only for our time..silly me..but i am enjoying this also...but a lil slow..being unaware of Indian history n preindependent life etc.am a lil slow..unaware means only less knwldg..i am not ignorant..
Liking Khushi very much..n thank god Arnav didnt did it...

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
Beautifully written, thanks for sharing.

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
The 0nly thing Arnav's plight made me d0 was laugh 0ut l0ud!! H0weverfar he may want t0 run, the s0ciety always catches up with him, in fact, is 0ne step ahead 0f him and in the pr0cess -f defeating him, m0cking him. His values g0t a g00d beating after this incident at the Tawaawif place. S0 m0ving 0n, will he take his Khushi with him when he leaves the h0use?? He has t0, but what is he g0nna d0 ab0ut this "child-w0man"?? He may have had a g00d laugh n0w but s00n it will be pay-back time

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
hi hi.. I remember TIH where  first few chaps were so dark i thought of quitting reading but later you managed to give hopes ..if you did not give the addendum here may b this time also i would have stopped .. I just cant stand arnav being with other woman having s.. except khushi .. its just impossible for me to even think .. so pls dont ever try to do this .. Big smile 
now its getting very interesting .. need to know how she would become the woman in his life .. :) 

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Awww Smile... 
What an amazing update ClapClap!!!

Just wondering whether we can expect a jealous Arnav in this story..

I want Khushi to keep distance from now on.. It'd be so good to see Arnav coming to her (to chat of course Wink) instead...!!

Someday, I also want to see Arnav's fear of losing Khushi (like she faced now...)..!!

Please update soon...Day Dreaming...


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