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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 32)

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Yay! Eagerly waiting for update... :)

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 7:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vgedin

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Next update on Wednesday :)

Hug





Yay!Dancing

Will Arnab get her a new doll ? Disapprove


Khushi will lose interest in dolls...Ouch


NahiiiCryCryCry



Lol lol lol Twiggs
You want this story to progress na
Or u want him to take the nightly cobble stone drive ya

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 7:07am | IP Logged
Arey somebody wake up Jenny..

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:04am | IP Logged
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Edited by IPK007 - 12 December 2014 at 4:22pm

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:07am | IP Logged
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yes yes yesParty

You know, the party emoticon above was for the first reserve but now I have changed my mind. I'm partying coz Arnav after all didn't sleep with that girl. How could he? The very reason why you seeked outside pleasure - he wanted to save a young girl from himself would be a lost cause if he had gone ahead and performed the act. But I must say I was surprised the girl admitted her age. Because normally they would pretend to be older and the patrons would never know.

Honestly, Jenny, I was prepared for the worst because such were the times. Marital fidelity was not high on the list in those times. It was indeed so rare that it was non-prevalent. But I'm so happy for Khushi and the I loved the way you plotted this.Ingenious.

So, Arnav plans to move out...why do I get the feeling he is not going to take Khushi with him? I maybe wrong...will wait and watch.

Khushi is a little cracker ...isn't she? What spirit and she wants a baby? to replace her doll? Awww...cho chweet... and she made Arnav laugh...this was suhc a feel good update. Enjoyed it thoroughly.


Waiting for the day, when Khushi is gonna knock his senses off...




Edited by AquaSandhya - 04 September 2013 at 7:46pm

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:12am | IP Logged
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Finally some answers Did He or Didn't He 

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HE DIDN'T Big smileyayaya you don't know how happy that makes me. Given the era where this story is based i had more or less consoled my heart that Arnabji might go ahead and DO IT. But he didn't and i loved his reasons for that. How could he go ahead and forget his pain, confusion, turmoil in the arms of a nubile 13 yr old girl when he had just reacted very strongly and put down his 14 yr old WIFE for the very same reason of being too YOUNG and still a child.

Poor lost confused child Khushi who wants to hold on to her Arnabji however she can and just wants to become a woman now. Though i will honestly confess that i did cringe when i heard thammi giving lessons to child khushi on how she should attract her husband but yes mindset of society during that era was quite different from now so i guess i am glad that Thammi took young khushi under her wings. 

Arnabji's apology just reinforces how much he is different from the men of those time. Imagine 'pati parmeshwar' apologising to his wife... pretty much unheard of during that time. 
I can just see Arnabji laughing his head out at the reason that his young child'woman' wife just gave him for moving into his room. 

A great update Jen...and i can't wait to read what is next up in store for Khushi and her Arnabji. 


Edited by kondhili - 04 September 2013 at 7:39pm

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:13am | IP Logged
I still don't understand, did he or didn't he? 
Poor Khushi, she's such an innocent.
She has lot of growing up to do.
The girl who played ith a doll a few days ago, now wants a baby.

If Arnav goes away, will he take Khushi with him?
Or will h leave her behind with his grandmother?

Very interesting and well researched story, Jen.
You are the best at writing historical romances.


Edited by 1chilly - 04 September 2013 at 11:31am

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 8:15am | IP Logged
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life has so 'what ifs' that thinking of them is always pinching. What if the girl hadnt been 13? He would have had this 'brain wave'.. And would have gone ahead for his mind had justified having sex with another woman to fulfill his needs. His 'morals' though stopped him when he came to know of her age. I really dont if I am frustrated more now or would have been more if he would have gone ahead.

I really feel heartbroken for that 13 year old, trained to be coy.

Stunning chapter Jen! In terms of such emotions that you effortlessly plant.

She wants a baby! She has no idea what she is upto. Such is cruelty with which the idea of being a woman, pleasing her husband has been forced into her and the naive fool is enthusiastic about it..
Here i am happy and glad that its Arnab who is her husband and she is safe. :) :) i hope love finds a way amongst such circumstances which realistically had been the order of those times.

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