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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 155)

dreamymaya Goldie
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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Hey Jenny, caught up with the last two updates today...
Arnav is having a hard time, you portray him very precisely - the confused youth of pre-independence time hailing from a rich background, studies, marriage, his ambitions, his principles all the concepts are neatly presented and it gives the matured look to Arnav. The way you weave Bengali culture in to the story also helps to see Arnav characterization evolving. The way he took Khushi to the library and how they both listened to the Tagore poems was beautiful. Khushi's innocence - the way you present her - 100/100 I could feel her innocence. the handkerchief gifting scene in bedroom and their first kiss was fantastic!

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 7:56am | IP Logged
beautiful update
poor pranab
wats khushi's sis name?

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tparvaiz Goldie
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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 9:04am | IP Logged
Awesome update
THANKS for mp me. 
Sorry for the late reply
I love arshi scene of hand cheift
Khushi had feelings of ar arnav 
and What about Arnav? 
Arnav was married with khushi sister
Parnab too married
Please continue 

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deelax18 Senior Member
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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 10:28am | IP Logged
hii...at first i was doubtful of this concept but now i am in love with it...Heartgreat ideaThumbs Up...can't wait for the next update...i would also like more humor and less seriousness Embarrassed

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YaSha0512 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Omg Jenny that was fantastic
So Pranab is also married but like Arnab at beginning he also does not think of his bride instead he is having feelings for khushi
Aww khushi fell asleep waiting for him
Glad Arnab has thought about their future he wants her with him when he moves
Again he was angry on her for no reason *sign* at least he saw her gift in time b4 she became upset
Wo ho looks like Arnab is starting to realize the change in khushi which his brother is also noticing
What will happen though once Arnab starts to show a lot more interest in khushi will it cause trouble between the two boys ?????
Although khushi hasn't even noticed Pranab yet will he try to woo her too . I know bad but might see some jealousy fae Arnab if he sees another guy after his khushi
Can't wait for next chapter thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon

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addictedx53 Senior Member
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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
Arnav is such a sweetheart, nazar na lage! Now that a triangle has been achieved with Pranab in the picture, the story is getting a different complication. With patience & understanding so essential to the future of this relationship,I wonder ...?

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
Superb update.
Loved the moments between Arnab and Khushi.  Glad that Arnab is planning to take Khushi along with him when he is moving away from home.   

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
awesome part, atlast arnav did little of something that we want but it was beautiful seriously, wonderful dear
yar her mother in law is very strict na haye poor khushi i feel bad for her.
but thanks God arnav is there dor her abd for her support...
loved reading this part too, thnx for the pm... now i'm waiting for the next part

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