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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 146)

loveandluck Senior Member

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
Aww, he cares for her too. How cute. Who is Pranab married to? This update was good, arnavs mother isn't very nice but oh well. I like how you wrote about arnavs concern for his family and khushi :) and khushi is so cute when she is looking at her handkerchief and seeing if it is alright.

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IllGetOverIpk IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
Amazing update !!
Sorry for not commenting regularly :(

Dhak dhak acidity awesome!!
I felt bad for Khushis sister though :(

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manikka IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
arnav had planned to take khushi with him...i think its better for all of them as prnab's attraction seems to be increasing day by if khushi is away frm him its good...
this was a awesome part...khushi is slowly falling for arnab...but unable to understand the feeling she has with him...
loved it...

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orchids8888 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
Dear thanks for the pm.Big smile

I loved this improvement in Arnav and Khushi's relation.Clap For the first time Arnav kissed Khushi.Blushing I feel this is the beginning of deep love between Arnav and Khushi.Heart

Thanks dear for informing about Arshi's past.

I hope Arnav takes Khushi with him. Day Dreaming

Please dear update.

Edited by orchids8888 - 18 September 2013 at 11:26pm

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BubblySanaya Goldie

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
That was an amazing part...i just LOVED it.
this is the first time so far in this story that Arnav has listened to his heart.
and i loved Khushi's reaction.
this reminds me of the first kiss near the pool (in the show i meant)

And Pranab...he is certainly falling for Khushi.
And as expected Khushi is all occupied with Arnav's thoughts.

I just hope Pranab's feelings will not create any problems between Khushi and Arnav.

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BlueAngel20 Senior Member

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 11:40pm | IP Logged
Another superb update Jenny di
I thought Pranab was unmarried here and will get married after he turns 15-16 years old but he is already married to a girl of 6 years.

Pranab told Khushi that he is going to fly kite in the terrace and asked will she accompany him?? but Khushi absent mindedly told no. Pranab was hurt

Arnab was married to Khushi's sister but she died due to chicken pox. Poor child and then 10 years old Khushi was married to 23 years old Arnab " HOW RUDE..!!! "

Khushi made embroidery in handkerchief for Arnab and wrote " A " as his name starts with A.

Khushi felt asleep while waiting for him and Arnab thought that his mum or thammi has send her here.

Arnab was happy when Khushi gifted him the handkerchief and I " LOVED " the special moments between Arnab and Khushi   Day Dreaming

Arnav kissed Khushi awiiieee Dancing

Khushi felt she is anaemic. She is such a child. My baby

and last Jenny di the the hint about Pranab you gave is making my heart stop a beat.

Jenny di update soon am eagerly waiting Smile 

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ashnitaa IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
I really loved arnab & khushi's cute romantic moment..
pranab's attraction towards khushi is natural..
update soon

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IPK007 Goldie

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
Thank God the Rabba Vey happened at the end of the story otherwise I would have been left with this huge lump in my throat that refused to go after reading about Khushi's sister's death...and how it was considered a blessing those days to die with those red and white bangles adorning a girl's wrists. As expected Pranab is married too! 
The story revolves around Arnab and Khushi but you have very easily established all the other characters too so effectively and that is the sign of good storytelling!!!

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