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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 145)

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 9:24pm | IP Logged
Awesome update.
Gosh Pranab is getting attracted to Khushi. Hope things do not get sore between Arnav Khushi due to this.

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
I loooved it

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
So Pranab is also married but now attracted to Khushi...because of the same age...I guess.
Very beautifully described those old Calcutta's days...
You have shown so much innocence and purity in their relationship...
I loved ARSHI moment...wonderful update...
Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 9:57pm | IP Logged
I P K BOND...IT IS TIME FOR ''CHANGE''

NEW AWAKENINGS

NEW FEELINGS 

NEW FLUTTERS 

NEW SURROUNDINGS

NEW SENSES

NEW EMOTIONS

NEW FEARS

NEW RUSHES

NEW JOLTS

NEW FLUSHES

NEW SURGES

NEW DREAMS

NEW CONFUSIONS

NEW PASSIONS

NEW OPENINGS 

NEW CLOSURES

NEW SECURITIES

NEW EXPRESSIONS

NEW SUBMISSIONS

NEW HEARTBEATS

NEW AFFECTIONS

NEW MUSINGS

NEW CHARM

NEW COMPASSION 

NEW ATTRACTION

NEW COURAGE

NEW ENTHUSIASM

NEW WARMTH

NEW CONSCIOUSNESS

IT IS ALL GOING TO BRING THEM CLOSER TO REALITY

THANKS 




KKKA






Edited by KKKA - 18 September 2013 at 10:40pm

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
Enjoyed the update.
I am however struggling a little with the age difference between A & K !
It was a different era though - the time in which this story is set.

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 10:19pm | IP Logged
Hi jenny I remember seeing a movie or serial on doordarshan on the same story line where the freedom movement runs in parallel and the girl who is married early doesn't understand husband needs. Finally she will be taken to the Hindu temples where the sculptures depicting Kamasutra are shown to her and she unites with her husband in the end.

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
i loved it
add me in ur buddy list
do pm me

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
I absolutely loved this update.   It was a very poignant, sweet, touching and romantic update.  The gentle kiss on the cheek just made my day...Khushi's first kiss from her husband...yay!  Her evaluation of her racing heart was the cutest, most adorable post mortem I have ever seen.  

You described Khushi's slow, hesitant steps into maturity and tender delicate feelings so well...her intense labor of love, the embroidered handkerchief which she is so painstakingly embroidering...and regressing back nto her optimistic child phase where she concludes that its okay if it's not perfect because it is after all just going to be used to wipe the nose...lol.  Also loved her day dream of him praising her embroidery...lol...specially the part where he compares her to his mother...she is sooo cute...her dreams are all woven around him.  

I am simply ecstatic tht in this update we now see Arnab too being affected by her and fighting to control his attraction and yet saying 'Thank you' for the present in such a bemused adorable manner.  He curbed his impulses and treated her so gently and sweetly.  

Best of all for me was his concern when he reflects on the group meeting he went to and their motto on violence, about his family, his Khushi and his resolve to move after he becomes a doctor so Khushi does not have to stay in any bad place...so he is thinking of taking her with him...you have no idea how happy this made me. 


Edited by Anamika100 - 18 September 2013 at 10:33pm

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