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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 138)

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Posted: 20 September 2013 at 3:24pm | IP Logged
I love it love it yaaar it is awsome tough u have to change the topic i mean what is written in front of the ff headingsomethin like link to 2nd trd

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Posted: 20 September 2013 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
Aww. so sweet of Khushi.. her 1st token of love to 'A'rnav..
Readin abt Khushi family's past ws heart wrenching :(
I love her fr her nvr gv up spirit so much. despite discouraging comments frm her m.i.l , it dint deter her to discontinue..
Aand sigh!! wot an acknowledgement fr the present by her husband! :D
heart fluttering n blushworthy..
Pranab too is married. wot do these kids understand the significance of such a sacred union if dey r married at such a tender age?

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 12:07am | IP Logged
Alas! it ws the norm those days n the sufferings , sacrifices had to be made by the lil ones widout evn knowning wot dey r exactly doing..
#disheartening :(

Edited by kooldewdrop - 21 September 2013 at 12:08am

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 12:50am | IP Logged
Khushi is so sweet ..she is day dreaming abt arnav..she is eager to embroider so as to please arnab . willing to take up a boring job diligently just for her arnab..

Arnaab is so caring & attentive to Khushi though he can be impulsive & a complete jerk

Sigh ..Arnaab is satisfied with the effect he has on her at his proximity..nd poor khushi has not come to terms with wats happening to her..

Jen simply marvelous loved it

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 1:13am | IP Logged
its beauuutiful...
her feelings are changing ...she is stepping the first line of her womanhood...and gosh !!!! the kiss was amazing...it gave me goosebumps while reading...
loved the update very much... 

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 6:04am | IP Logged
Jenny..I am falling more and more in love with your stories with every new chapter. Love it..beautifulLy written...loving the chemistry now..

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Hey Jenny, caught up with the last two updates today...
Arnav is having a hard time, you portray him very precisely - the confused youth of pre-independence time hailing from a rich background, studies, marriage, his ambitions, his principles all the concepts are neatly presented and it gives the matured look to Arnav. The way you weave Bengali culture in to the story also helps to see Arnav characterization evolving. The way he took Khushi to the library and how they both listened to the Tagore poems was beautiful. Khushi's innocence - the way you present her - 100/100 I could feel her innocence. the handkerchief gifting scene in bedroom and their first kiss was fantastic!

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 7:56am | IP Logged
beautiful update
poor pranab
wats khushi's sis name?

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