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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 138)

nhrb Senior Member
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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
the update is so  beautiful.& one thing  being a non bengali the way u write this ss , the way u capture the the  esence of  bengali traditions & cultures  of that era..just outsanding.i think this ss is no less than any bengali classic.

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
This period drama is flowing so well...Jenny!
Loved how Arnav is maturing and thinking of all his responsibilities...it's very reassuring.. ...he's taking it slow with his Khushi...it's so nice..love how they interact with each other...

Your writing makes its so ..lovely... a very special way

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
I'm in love with the story...
very nice...

continue soon...

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
Its was very unique n very well writend...
I thnk its the best writing style n topic...
Coz i personaly like age difrences b/w wife
N husband as u described dere love, chemistry
Attraction everythng is perfect.
Plzzz update soon

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
Wow You cover every facet of those times and the nuances of the situation Arnab, Khushi, Pranab, all of them are facing. I am floored. Thanks for the PM :)

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
loved it.. beautiful update update jenny
I don't like when earlier time people make small children wedding.. when it's the time for them to play and enjoy childhood and mostly were not even teenagers... and they were married that time and some used to have baby at teenage... it's ridiculous.. but glad khushi is studying if yest she is married but nobody is forcing her to do anything at all and that's good for her well arnav decision helped her too as he wants he to be mature before starting their relation...
felt bad knowing how her sister died in slow age
wow.. khushi embroidered handkerchief for him with A written on it.. so sweet
glad arnav was thinking with his heart when it comes to khushi... and his feelings for her is increasing and now khushi also start to feel dhak-dhak around him after his kiss.. another feeling and different emotions were set on her... loved her confusion
hmm.. pranab feelings for khushi is chaning and it's not good fi he realize it as he going getting bigger too and having sense to understand everything.. and also he is married.. well see what happens if any love triangle happen hope it wont
really loved this chapter
beautifully written
continue soon

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
well well well seems there is more at hand here than meets the eye
seems arnav babu is feeling something for his wife
and the said wife is feeling more than she can comprehend
awww bless her she doesnt know why all the dhak dhak happening
and she is coming up with reasons for same
but wont reach the right reason as of yet right
hmm his khushi thats interesting how he is thinking of her
arnie hope you know what you are getting yourself involved with
and i dont mean your young bride
so pranab too is married but he hardly remembers it
and with khushi there something is happening that he dont know about
so she wanted to make him a handkerchief with embroidery
hmmm so she is getting more domestic huh
thats real cute
and must arnie just jump to conclusions there
but guess what else would he have thought naa
so it begins
the start of all that dhak dhak and what not
cheers for pm

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
Oh wonderful...
I am just loving this slow transition of khushi from her childhood to adulthood...
it happens wid all of us, right!!!!
heart beat skipping on seeing our crush, or the sudden pang of hurt on seeing him talking to someone else, n we dont even understand the reason...
n wen we grow up, we come to kno, dat it was all a stupid game of those stupid hormones...
nostalgic, yeah...

anyways, I think pranab's wife should step in now...
may be she can help khushi too in her mission of becoming a woman...!!!

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