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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 137)

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
superb update loved it :)

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
OMG their first rabba ve! thats so sweet but isnt khushi a bit too early for all that? lol. poor her, she doesnt even know wat is happening to her and y her heart keeps racing like a rajdhani express everytime he is near her!!! but im really arnab knew his limits and he stopped at the right moments! i think it would have been kind of awkward for both of them!

i know this strory is happening in the past but i cant imagine how a 6 year old gets married! she is s till a child and wats the use of doing something so sacred when neither the groom or the bride will be having any recollection of that! n pranab is not even realising that like khushi he too he is committed to someone else who soon would be making an entry in his life! i dont want to see a love triangle. lol

i think the idea of khushi making that handkerchief for arnab was so sweet and slowly she is getting herself in the role of his wife without even knowing it

mind blowing update! just loved it

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
Awsommmiiieee well 2dayz chp had da flashback of arnab-khushi's shaadi prt...how dey end up marrying...arnab wasn't much attachd 2 his 1st wife infct not at all...khushi made an hanky 4 him...awww how cute & arnab too appricatd hr...gud chalo hez shwing gud hubby's symptomz...khushi arnab scene in his room der 1st kiss & khushi's 1st reaction 2 his closness...cmz lyk 1st sign of luv khushi has strtd 2 realiz it...well khushi is pranab's bhabhi & i think he myt hav som feelings 4 khushi...chalo letz c whtz nxt update sooon!!!

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Jenny, we absolutely don't mind you writing more than you want!
Beautiful as always!

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Jenny, my darling, how you write so good and makes me spell bound every time!
So Pranab was also married. Gosh a six years old girl got married. In that time Marriage was  a game or what? i was happy when, you mentioned that he was married. but then at the end of the story when i came to know that he was actually hurt to see the blooming love between Arnab and Khushi. I hope he doesn't create any mess in it. Cause for me Arnab and Khushi are meant and made for each other. 
I was laughing gleefully when Arnab pulled her towards him and gave her a peck on her cheek. I know she was not a complete woman. But to see them intimate my heart pounded erratically. You know, I'm an obsessed lover of Arnav and Khushi.  I'm so happy that Arnab is leaning towards her. It was so thoughtful of him that he planned a separate home for them.
Khushi was infatuated to arnab, but after the kiss she fall in love with him.
can't really wait to read the next chapter.

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
So both Arnab and Khushi are slowly becoming aware of each other as man and woman... unfortunately so is Pranab...
I loved Khushi's innocent exploration of the way she is feeling...

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
Fantastic update...loved it Hug

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
Awesome update .
Pranab is also married,I m very relieved ...
but he is very young to understand this feelings...
And arshi part was wonderful.
Waiting for more...
Thanks for PM.

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