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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 134)

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 11:49am | IP Logged
that was a so sweet jen...
first love feeling for khushi... i liked the way her thoughts were going... first she thought having more food cause her heart beat faster... third piece of sandesh...lolz... okay then she must be anemic cause her friend got fast heart beat and she was anemic... poor khushi i am waiting for her to realise her actual feeling...
Arnab... strong with his belief and value... but do want to give in to his feeling towards her... that hanky giving scene was really beautiful.
so he is planning to take her with him thats really nice.
the past was not very pleasant for them neither Arnav nor his first wife and even not for khushi.
now also pranab he is already married to someone and here started feeling for his sister in law...
nice updates jen will wait for next thanks :D

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 11:50am | IP Logged
gr8 update

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 11:51am | IP Logged

I love it as usual koz it always well written & describe

thanks for pm & want to read more

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 11:51am | IP Logged
I can really see a lot of maturity in khushi - she is really GROWING up -
loved the update to the core jenny
 

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 11:51am | IP Logged
Nice

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 11:52am | IP Logged
Like all your Arshi FFs, this one too is a classic! You are simply the best Jenny! I hope more & more people come to know about your Arshi FFs & become your fans!

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 11:54am | IP Logged
This is wonderful! You have captured the essence of that time in Calcutta, before independent India beautifully! I love period stories...they have a certain charm...your story is like that...it has a certain charm...it takes the reader back to those times...

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 11:55am | IP Logged
Thnx for d pm
Beautiful.

Its such a sweet story beautifully written.
Khushi must be such a cute adorable 13yr old.
She's tryin so much so her husband Arnav babu would like her.
She made an A with embroidery on a  handkerchief jus for him.
Arnav also is so amused n now smitten by khushi's innocence.
He thnked her n then again looked at her n cudnt take his eyes off her n kissed her on the cheek.
Poor khushi thinks why she gets dhak dhak n thinks it anemia.
Arnav is also thinking practically now n keeping khushi in mind while making his decisions reg his job n house.

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