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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 130)

msmarple Goldie

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
Enjoyed the update.
I am however struggling a little with the age difference between A & K !
It was a different era though - the time in which this story is set.

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sairam03 Senior Member

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 10:19pm | IP Logged
Hi jenny I remember seeing a movie or serial on doordarshan on the same story line where the freedom movement runs in parallel and the girl who is married early doesn't understand husband needs. Finally she will be taken to the Hindu temples where the sculptures depicting Kamasutra are shown to her and she unites with her husband in the end.

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akshad Goldie

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
i loved it
add me in ur buddy list
do pm me

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Anamika100 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
I absolutely loved this update.   It was a very poignant, sweet, touching and romantic update.  The gentle kiss on the cheek just made my day...Khushi's first kiss from her husband...yay!  Her evaluation of her racing heart was the cutest, most adorable post mortem I have ever seen.  

You described Khushi's slow, hesitant steps into maturity and tender delicate feelings so well...her intense labor of love, the embroidered handkerchief which she is so painstakingly embroidering...and regressing back nto her optimistic child phase where she concludes that its okay if it's not perfect because it is after all just going to be used to wipe the  Also loved her day dream of him praising her the part where he compares her to his mother...she is sooo cute...her dreams are all woven around him.  

I am simply ecstatic tht in this update we now see Arnab too being affected by her and fighting to control his attraction and yet saying 'Thank you' for the present in such a bemused adorable manner.  He curbed his impulses and treated her so gently and sweetly.  

Best of all for me was his concern when he reflects on the group meeting he went to and their motto on violence, about his family, his Khushi and his resolve to move after he becomes a doctor so Khushi does not have to stay in any bad he is thinking of taking her with have no idea how happy this made me. 

Edited by Anamika100 - 18 September 2013 at 10:33pm

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loveandluck Senior Member

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
Aww, he cares for her too. How cute. Who is Pranab married to? This update was good, arnavs mother isn't very nice but oh well. I like how you wrote about arnavs concern for his family and khushi :) and khushi is so cute when she is looking at her handkerchief and seeing if it is alright.

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IllGetOverIpk IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
Amazing update !!
Sorry for not commenting regularly :(

Dhak dhak acidity awesome!!
I felt bad for Khushis sister though :(

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manikka IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
arnav had planned to take khushi with him...i think its better for all of them as prnab's attraction seems to be increasing day by if khushi is away frm him its good...
this was a awesome part...khushi is slowly falling for arnab...but unable to understand the feeling she has with him...
loved it...

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orchids8888 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
Dear thanks for the pm.Big smile

I loved this improvement in Arnav and Khushi's relation.Clap For the first time Arnav kissed Khushi.Blushing I feel this is the beginning of deep love between Arnav and Khushi.Heart

Thanks dear for informing about Arshi's past.

I hope Arnav takes Khushi with him. Day Dreaming

Please dear update.

Edited by orchids8888 - 18 September 2013 at 11:26pm

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