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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 127)

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Wonderful Update!! First gift for Arnab from Khushi and their first kiss means cheek kiss.. It was a bliss to read you writings you know.. I never thought that Khushi is Arnab's second Child wife.. Khushi lost her everyone... Feeling sad for the poor soul... But now she has her Arnab babuu with her.. And after the kiss Khushi's explanation about her increasing heart beat was funny and cute.. Pranab was attracted by Khushi's charm.. Don't know what will the result of all this.. Waiting for next..

Edited by RockDiya21 - 18 September 2013 at 12:49pm

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 9:40am | IP Logged
I read it in one breath...I loved the ARSHI moment..I guess u have done a lot of research on bengali novels,culture as well as movies.hat's off to you...ClapClapClapClap


Edited by dieforasr - 18 September 2013 at 10:36am

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 9:48am | IP Logged
arre wah!!! updat jaldi aa jao!
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Haila!!! forgot that i resed here!! sigh...me n my short memory!!!Confused

commented on pg136Embarrassed
loved the update:)

Edited by -HEAVEN- - 18 September 2013 at 12:08pm

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 9:51am | IP Logged
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Such a lovey update! My god! I cannot term those moments as first sign of bonding! It was purely impulsive! I just hope he wouldn't regret it later! I'm sure he wont because he was satisfied with her reaction to his actions!

And how things changed from khushi to his khushi! How he now includes her in his every thought and action!

Sad to read one died of chiken pox and the lady is just concerned that the kid dies with bangles! Senseless people! And more so the second wedding! Eww!

And pranab hmm poor guy! But in a way they seem more fine as the age says so! But arshi! So ya!

Cheers

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 10:09am | IP Logged
Updated on pg 126:) Hope you like it!

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Phoole phoole dhole dhole
Bohe ki ba mridubay

Piko ki ba kunje kunje
Ku-uhu, ku-uhu, ku-uhu gaaye

Ke jaane kishe'r o laane
Pran-o kore haaye haaye

It is one of my favorite Rabindra shongeet.

I love this. Because it is set in a time period in my favorite city that I really love, for it is picturesque and the best, and the worst times that Bengali culture (and the nation) went through the motions of change.

I adore your narration of this. The naivete of Khushi, the clash of intent, need and rationale within Arnav. It's amazing how you describe the mental picture of the people of that age, the nuances of social and familial relationships. I also like the mention of courtesans as women who were desired, not just because of their sexual liasons, but because men found pleasure that is not just of the body, in their presence.

I cannot wait for more of this. Another obsession this will be, for sure.

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 10:30am | IP Logged
Awesome update! this one was pretty good then teaser...i was worring over arnab thinking about he being too old for khushi...this time around he is addressing her as his khushiSmile

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 10:36am | IP Logged
*blush*
And the famous dhak dhak is back! :) 
How could Khushi be separated from her Dhak Dhak encounters? hehe! 

That was a good one! particularly because of Arnav's conduct and ahem ahem!! :) ...now that he decided to put his rise in the hormonal to use with the right person this time! he he albeit with just a kiss on the cheek! Well not completely satisfying ... but that will do for starters! :)
  
Now the ending! Pranab! Hey Bhagwaan! where is this gonna go? *biting nails*
I really wish this does not turn out messier than what it is already with a child bride and all the other political situation in the country having its toll on the family in question! 
Ouh dear! cant wait to know! 

Thanks Jenny! 



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