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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 126)

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
loved the update...loved the way arnav appreciated khushi's efforts...he is really sweet when it comes to khushi...
khushi is so young and naive...she doesn't even know why arnav's closeness affects her...i hope arnav keeps on behaving nicely with her...the child in her deserves all the love and care...
i hope pranab doesn't cause a problem between arnav and khushi...
continue soon

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
Thank you for providing us a background on characters. One sister goes another comes in apparently. I just don't get these child marriages and I don't see any justification for it. I'm like stumped! I totally get why Arnav is so turned off by this. He has been married to two sisters with one wife passing even before he knew her

So Pranab is also married? What is wife going to do when she sees how close he is to Khushi. I feel khushi and Pranab might be told to break their friendship off because it will be considered inappropriate when they get older

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 2:29pm | IP Logged
comment updated pg 127

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
Very sweet update

Pranab is at the age of having a crush... Hope he doesn't cause an issue in future for three if them

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
That was beautiful!
I love khushi's character the inosense of a child and the awareness of a women its amazing!
And this lil rabba vey was beautifully written!
And i feel sorry for pranab too poor guy javing his first heart ache!

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
So my perception about Pranab was wrong..
he also is married to some other girl..
but still he is having feelings for Khushi..
And as much as i understand and ofcourse, it is obvious too..Arnab has also feelings for HIS Khsuhi now..
Their Interaction was very beautifully writen..
Poor soul is always scared of Arnab
Only thing that gives me negative vibes is this riot thingy..
Dont know what will happen next but waiting anxiously..
THanks for giving LONG update :)

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 3:12pm | IP Logged
Lovely update! Awww khushi made a handkerchief for him. How sweet. And then arnabs first physical interaction with her! He is being very patient and letting her come to terms with her feelings. Khushi is so confused. He's closeness has completely rattled her!

Poor parnab! I feel so sorry for him. He knows that he cannot have khushi. Interested to know more about his wife

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 3:35pm | IP Logged
It's a fantastic update.ita a unique story full of reality of life.
What arnav's mother is doing is not at all wrong. She is doing her job to teach her what a girl suppose to do to, after all she is going to take care of her house, but yes we know that she is not her mother so there will be some difference. Even my mother also teach me how to cook and other stuff when I was young, I use be so angry on her that why I have to do all this work. My mother is a teacher and she knew that along with education a girl should know other things also after all she has to go to other house. And now I feel that she was right.
Khushi's mother in law is not that bad either she is letting her educate but at the same time she is teaching her other things in her own way. 
Now what to say about arnav, Khushi is lucky to have him because in those days no other man could have think of Khushi like arnav is doing for her. He don't want to leave house because he wants Khushi to be safe and stay in good place once he leave his fathers house. It is for Khushi only otherwise he could have left the house the day when his father said those things.
You have done marvellous work in this story. Keeping the essence of that time in its place. Really it's great to read how their relation is growing with the time.. 
Thanks for the beautiful update and pm.

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