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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 123)

mthara Newbie

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Posted: 17 September 2013 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Wow Jenny it is going so good. I was bit skeptical in the beginning about a child marriage. Having read so far the story is beautifully developing between the two leads, I love the Arnab -he has a lot of depth in his character & hope u would be able to bring this out to the readers. For the time being character of  is yet to grow.Hope she is worthy of her man- I'm waiting to see how u go about this.
Thank u for the PM

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vandana.sagar IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 17 September 2013 at 10:06am | IP Logged
Waiting ...tick tock tick tock...

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Posted: 17 September 2013 at 10:14am | IP Logged
waiting for wednesday...

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pixiegirl IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 September 2013 at 7:21pm | IP Logged
Hey Jen, sorry a quick comment dear for both the chapter & the teaser... Been swamped lately Unhappy
I adored the way Arnab tenderly extricated himself from such a delicate situation... How do you tell a child she is too young to have a child & not break her heart, especially if the person saying so happens to be her husband himself??? Sigh!

Arnab is such a thorough gentleman, he did not want to break his child-bride's heart yet managed to turn the conversation around by taking Khushi to listen to the gramophone record of the song she was reading instead... :) Her childlike enthusiasm at hearing the song playing was so infectious & sweet...

Their conversation on the couch was so endearing... Arnav clearly being able to read his wife's emotions reflected on her adorable face like a book... Her whole being seems to pivot around the acceptance from her husband... His rejection pierces her juvenile heart more than anything in the world & Arnab is absolutely a darling in making sure he does not break her heart again...

It was also amazing to see him be drawn to her blossoming beauty & curb his own desires at the sight of his alluring wife & waiting patiently for her to grow up...

These lines were clearly depicting that...

"He liked this child, he liked this child a lot and he was looking forward to loving the woman, whose glimpses he caught in her from time to time. "

And like Arnab, I too can't wait to see the grown-up Khushi, so looking forward to see their young love bloom like a Spring flower...

About the teaser...

From what I can make out it seems to me that Khushi is upset over the news that Arnab will be moving out of his father's house & living alone, & that is obviously not acceptable to his dear bride... She is angry with him for leaving her behind & going away... Poor girl, what a rotten place to be in... She surely is beginning to develop some strong emotions for her husband but being a child & being treated as one must be really frustrating for her now... Can fully understand her pain... My heartfelt sympathies for Khushi undoubtedly, what a tough place to be in...

Edited by pixiegirl - 17 September 2013 at 7:22pm

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Posted: 17 September 2013 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
interesting twist liked it...

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Yipee its wednesday
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It's Wednesday... Big smile
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Update dayyy

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