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One of the things I keep reminding myself when I read this story is to keep the time period this story is set in, in mind. It is very  very important to keep my perspective straight. 

Frankly, Khushi is not having a bad life...if we take the times into consideration. The family has taken her under their wing, she is clothed, fed and educated. It isn't a bad life at all.

Yes, those were the times, when children were told if they didn't do something well...it is not current times when we are taught to tell our kids,  what is good before telling them how it could be done better. But in a way I understand Arnav's mum...coz my mum did that too...not cooking mind you...but we were told what we could do as kids.

The thing about this story...so far I haven't come across any bad characters...each is flawed  just proving they are only human. 

Arnav of course stands tall...with his morals, values...

Now the rabba vey's have begun? Khushi is fourteen right? She is such a sweet heart and she is beginning to understand the nuances of physical relationship...good. OMG...how will Arnav wait for 2 years? or is it gonna be earlier...

May I admit that I was ecstatic that Arnav felt something fro Khushi...

Can you imagine Jen...in todays' world if a twenty seven year old touched a fourteen year old we cry molestation and murder...This again goes to show, one needs to read this story by keeping the times in mind. 

Loved it as usual Smile


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Jen theres so much I have to say, I don't know where to start. But let me begin with Khushi's sister. What life, and what death? Deprived of a childhood, given away to a stranger at such a young age, and isn't even remembered or missed for any more than a week after her death. Was married but has never known love? And you cannot even blame her husband for it, how is a hot blooded teenager to understand what it is to be married? What it is to be a husband? Its just so unfortunate.. so much time and so many lives wasted in this manner. Just makes me sigh. Same with Pranab, I cannot blame him for not caring for his wife but nurturing feelings for Khushi, but that does make me sad for Pranab's bride. Where does this leave that poor child? 

But this time around, Arnab is trying his best to do the right thing, as he understands better now. That is truly commendable. And I love how Khushi is slowly but surely becoming more of a woman now... she is also experiencing the first buds of love and attraction, and that coupled with her child-like affection and adoration for Arnav makes it so heart-warming. She does live up to her name, spreads joy wherever she goes. 

So Arnab does plan to take her with him when he moves out! Can't wait for that! But I worry how Khushi adjust to living without the rest of the family, when Arnab is busy at work all day long. But that I guess will happen sometime in future, let me not worry about it now. For now I will bask in the joy of the love that is making its way into the relationship between Arnab and Khushi. Loved the whole scene where she gives him the handkerchief, I think I was smiling as brightly as Khushi Big smile Amazing update, Jenny.

And now I am waiting for the next one already, especially the bit in the teaser Smile



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Thanks for the little background to how it all began, jen. A young child dies at such a young age and and people consider her lucky since she died a 'suhagan'...Angry
What a mindset!. I am not criticising Thammi she was was a woman of that era with complete belief in such ideology. 
But i love her for the fact that she has taken khushi completely under her wings and almost loves her like a daughter. 

My heart went out this young khushi who is already spinning dreams around her young and dashing husband.  I can totally understand Arnab loosing his temper with khushi thinking his mother was again interfering with his personal choices. Khushi's joy at finally receiving a compliment from her husband priceless.
Jen give me some leap in years so that i can enjoy the rabba ve moments between arnab and khushi...i want to write that i loved the first rabba ve moment between arnav and khushi but damn she is only 14-15 blasphemy i tell you...Ouch I know the story is set in that era and if i remember correctly my grandma was a mom by the age of 17-18. Ouch

Coming to pranab isn't it time for his wife also to make a grand entry to her sasural. I wonder what is in next store for us.

Great update Jen...and your writing mesmerising as usual. Star


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Like it???i LOVED it Jenny Apu...this is just too awesome...first time Arnab let his heart rule his mind...first time Khushi felt her dhak dhak...update cant be more beautiful...a fond smile plastered in my face after reading it...loved it so much...
thanks for giving the complete idea of Arnav,Khushi and also Pranab's married life...dont know why but I am not that afraid of Pranab's feeling towards Khushi...and I really hope it remains this way...
Is Arnab going to get involved in politics and all...everything will be different then...I am a little afraid of this...
i've already read ArShi portion twice...after posting the comment,I am gonna read it again...its too awesome...thank you so much for this...



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Loved the update, Jen.
Child marriages were the norm at this pre independance era.
Men could of course remarry if their wife died but there were so many child widowswho were ostracised by society through no fault of their own.
Arnav married Khushi's sister and then her.
Loved the small moment between Arnab and Khushi.
She is already developing feelings for him.

And what about Pranab? 
Hat will he do now? 
Won't his wife too come to his house soon? 
Waiting for the next chapter.


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