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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 107)

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 1:47am | IP Logged
just amazing my dear ... loved the sentence  very much..."He liked this child, he liked this child a lot and he was looking forward to loving the woman"... and im waiting with him to see his love for her...

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 2:14am | IP Logged
hey what with the Pranab now yr plz dont creat any love 3

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 2:15am | IP Logged
really nice story
update soon

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 2:58am | IP Logged
Wow! That was one wonderful update.
I just loved Arnab and Khushi's part. Though Arnav is not very old and has his own moments of making mistakes, like the one where hewent to that house, he is way too matured for his age and the environment in which he was brought up.

"Childhood lies in the state of your mind, not in numbers"- I'm never gonna forget this one and I know for sure that I'm going to use this often :)

It's a twist in the tale. It is natural for Pranab to have feelings for Khushi as they spend so much time with each other but please don't make it a reason for Arnab to let go of Khushi. I know they are the leads but but even the thought scares us :P

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 4:21am | IP Logged
Can't wait for the next chapter.

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 4:27am | IP Logged
can't wait to read more

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 4:49am | IP Logged
huhh ye kya hua!!! i mean pranab is mesmerised by his bhabhi!!! poor guy! he doesnt even know wat is happening to him!
now coming to update!!! it was just superb and awesome as usual. jenny everytime i read one of the updates its like im on a journey in ancient india and loving these little glimpses of how things were used to be and how a typical bengali family used to stay. loved how intense every little details are whether its describing the rooms and the house or whether its description of the changing seasons!

im just liking this arnab, he is a true gentleman and he is so matured despite his young age but i think that together with khushi he still needs some growing up to do. so i guess it ll be growing and maturing period for both arnab and his sweet little innocent wife! i loved the way that he was being more considerate towards khushi and her feelings, he understood that sometimes growing up can be a painful process and that too in the circumstances they were now and he is doing all his best to make it a smooth and easy one for her one!

"He liked this child, he liked this child a lot and he was looking forward to loving the woman, whose glimpses he caught in her from time to time."

these few words just conquered my heart! this shows that arnab is a man who knows that patience does bear its fruits and he is going to wait for his child bride to evolve as a young woman and with khusho being this lively and feisty life for sure is not going to be boring for them!

n its the first time i was listening to that bengali song and im so liking it. thx for introducing me to that:))))






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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 5:22am | IP Logged
enjoyed reading it

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