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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS - Page 93

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Posted: 10 years ago
Its was very unique n very well writend...
I thnk its the best writing style n topic...
Coz i personaly like age difrences b/w wife
N husband as u described dere love, chemistry
Attraction everythng is perfect.
Plzzz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow You cover every facet of those times and the nuances of the situation Arnab, Khushi, Pranab, all of them are facing. I am floored. Thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it.. beautiful update update jenny
I don't like when earlier time people make small children wedding.. when it's the time for them to play and enjoy childhood and mostly were not even teenagers... and they were married that time and some used to have baby at teenage... it's ridiculous.. but glad khushi is studying if yest she is married but nobody is forcing her to do anything at all and that's good for her well arnav decision helped her too as he wants he to be mature before starting their relation...
felt bad knowing how her sister died in slow age
wow.. khushi embroidered handkerchief for him with A written on it.. so sweet
glad arnav was thinking with his heart when it comes to khushi... and his feelings for her is increasing and now khushi also start to feel dhak-dhak around him after his kiss.. another feeling and different emotions were set on her... loved her confusion
hmm.. pranab feelings for khushi is chaning and it's not good fi he realize it as he going getting bigger too and having sense to understand everything.. and also he is married.. well see what happens if any love triangle happen hope it wont
really loved this chapter
beautifully written
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
well well well seems there is more at hand here than meets the eye
seems arnav babu is feeling something for his wife
and the said wife is feeling more than she can comprehend
awww bless her she doesnt know why all the dhak dhak happening
and she is coming up with reasons for same
but wont reach the right reason as of yet right
hmm his khushi thats interesting how he is thinking of her
arnie hope you know what you are getting yourself involved with
and i dont mean your young bride
so pranab too is married but he hardly remembers it
and with khushi there something is happening that he dont know about
so she wanted to make him a handkerchief with embroidery
hmmm so she is getting more domestic huh
thats real cute
and must arnie just jump to conclusions there
but guess what else would he have thought naa
so it begins
the start of all that dhak dhak and what not
cheers for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh wonderful...
I am just loving this slow transition of khushi from her childhood to adulthood...
it happens wid all of us, right!!!!
heart beat skipping on seeing our crush, or the sudden pang of hurt on seeing him talking to someone else, n we dont even understand the reason...
n wen we grow up, we come to kno, dat it was all a stupid game of those stupid hormones...
nostalgic, yeah...

anyways, I think pranab's wife should step in now...
may be she can help khushi too in her mission of becoming a woman...!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ahh time to say hello to Dhak Dhak..

Finally the woman in Khushi is awakening, while Arnav remains as patient as ever, giving her all the time and space she needs.

Pranab is feeling the first string of love as well..

I love how you remain true to the time period, and touch on issues like the independence movement, the hot blooded young men who didn't agree with Gandhi jee's principals, the secret meetings, the looming danger, all of these add to the feeling of being transported to that era.

Great update as always :) 
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it...

khushi is too cute...

loved their first proximity...

wats with pranab now?? hope he  doesnt do anythng stupid...

thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thankgod our kushi loves arnab it couldn't be any other way could it?
Loved the update
I hope she grows up faster
Thanks a ton for the pm:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally Arnav is falling for Kushi and she too feels for him..poor Pranab
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Posted: 10 years ago
Must say heart warming and mind blowing update , first kiss , first sign of attraction , so glad that for the first time Arnav listens to his heart , good going Arnab babu , I know I know ur wife is so young and innocent but she also have a heart and female harmones , which needs ur attention , appreciation and love . Brilliant dear writter , whole update is written exceptionally well , spc slow transition of child Khushi to women . Finally love is in the air , I am hoping and requesting for the same kind of encounters bw Arnab and Khushi , am not worried about Pranav I think he will soon realize that Khushi is his Bhabhi and she is for Arnab only Arnab