The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS - Page 63

nice one.. glad that Arnav is letting Khushi to grow on her own..

Arhi relationship growth was amazing. He patiently explained to her about how she hasn't mature enough for babies.
Taking her to the library and showing her the gramophone.
I'm Glad he realised that his every word meant something to her.
He is slowly accepting her.

Okay pranab and khushi's closeness. Whenever their moments come, I feel that it should have been Arnav. He is getting a crush on her and I don't want to see Arnav sacrificing.

that's perfect...
arnab khushi moments were just beautifully written...
lovd the way their relation ix progressing...
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parnab falling 4 khushi...the story has become  more interesting...
plxxx continue soon...
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thnxxx a lot 4 pm...

The innocence you bring about in this delicate love story is amazing.

arnie has handled very well.nice yaar

Nice one

I don't know Jenny, while I was reading this update my heart was filled with concerns. Arnab understood the sweet little girl and wanted to wait for her to grow up. He is really a gentleman.

 

But by the end of this chapter, I was saying Oh No, Oh No, continuously. I hope Pranab does not cause any problems between Arnab and Khushi. Arnab should not feel he is too old for Khushi or Khushi should not think Pranab is of her age and Arnab is too old for her. I hope nothing of this sort happens.

 

Very well written... Enjoyed reading Arnab and Khushi's interaction... so much warmth and innocence...

 

I am glad you will be able to update frequently now. Can we wish for 2 chapters in a week ? Continue soon.

Edited by pinkly - 10 years ago

Oh no the younger one is also falling for khushi that means its not gonna be a smooth ride ahead.

That was an amazinggg update!!!

Uhhhooo why did pranab had to fall fr khushi, I hope its temporary and he gets over it and seeing khushi jus as his friend

Arnav has well said, childhood can't be limited to number,its in maturing
Khushi is relli affected by each word arnav says

Amazinggg update!!!

Uh oh teenage harmonies kicking in seems like...