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MG FF- Waqt ...badalte rishton ki dastaan. /th#2 added (Page 99)

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Posted: 11 October 2013 at 6:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by khwaishfan

hi dear! Fab update! Past well incorporated! They are nw arguing! hope they will be able to celebrate! update soon, well written


thanks dearBig smile

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Posted: 11 October 2013 at 6:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tamanna1391

awsem update bickering but emotional gap

thanks dear
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Posted: 11 October 2013 at 6:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sexy_Witch

nice ud

thanks dear
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Posted: 11 October 2013 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nishamna

priyanka it was amazing. finally maan reached to geet. geet is angry but not showing. i hope they celebrate their anniversary instead of fighting again. waiting for next dear

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Posted: 11 October 2013 at 6:12am | IP Logged

PART 10

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Maan : geet tum yaha aa rhi ho

Tumne mujhe bataya

Geet : wo toh baki sbka plan tha

Hamari anniversary ke liye

Dad ne kaha tha who aapko bata denge

Both see together towards watch.



Time: - 11:59 p.m


Maan & geet both wish together.

                     *********

Ab bhut late ho gya hai

Chlo so jaayo

Aryan : chahcu bs thodi aur der

Vicky : Baki ka doreomon kal dekhenge

Aryan : chachu

Vicky : no

He switched off the TV.

Vicky : ab so jaayo

Mehak : story to sunao

Vicky : what

Aryan : ha

Sunao na

             **********

Both hugged each other.

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 ''I Feel you entered in my life like an Angel ,When you spend time 


with me, I Feel i have no sorrows in my life, time is spent as fast 

as blow of wind '

                **********

Daadimaa : vicky ye dono abhi tak soye nhi

Aryan : badi daadi, chachu hume story sunane wale hai

Daadi : schi

Mehak : ha

Vicky : pr maine kb kaha

Daadi please aap in dono ko smbhailye

Mein toh chala

Aryan : chachu

Vicky : kya huya

Aryan : mujhe aapke pass sona hai

Daadi : Aryan , mehak aaj aap dono hmare pass soyenge

.

Chachu ke pass kal so jaana

Aur wo aaj hi aaye hai

Aur kaafi tired bhi  hai

Aryan : thik hai

Good night chachu

              *********

Both are feeding to each other.

Maan : bs geet

Geet : maan aap apna bilkul dhyan nhi rakhte hai

Maan : tum ho na

Geet : par har waqt toh nhi hoti na

.

.

Aap itna jyada busy rhte ho

He takes her hand on his hand.

Maan :  geet mein jaan buzkar toh asa nhi krta

Kya karu kaam jyada hai aur waqt km rh jaata hai

She placed her hand on his.

Geet : maan jaanti hu

Aur smjhti bhi hu

.

Isliye toh kuch khti nhi

Maan : aur khud ko takleef deti ho

Geet : nhi wo

Maan : sshhh

Geet

His phone buzzed.

He check the cell and said " ghar se phone"

Geet : maan uthaiye na

Maan : hmm

.

Daadi : maan bte

Maan : ha daadi

Daadi : zaraa geet se baat karwaiye

Maan : ji

Geet : ha daadi

Daadi : bte Aryan to so hi nhi raha hai

Wo baar baar aapke pass aane ko kh rha hai

Geet : daadi aap phone speaker pe kr dijiye

Daadi : hmm

Geet : kya huya mere bte ko

Aryan : mama mujhe aapke pass aana hai

Geet : phle apne aansu pucho

Aryan : hmm

Mehak : mom ye bilkul cry baby hai

Maan : kya huya

Geet : ek minute

She also opens the speaker, now from this maan also listen the conversation.

Geet : mehak asa nhi khte

Aapka chotta bhai hai na

Chlo ab dono late jaayo

Mama aap donmo ki fav. Story sunayengi

Aryan : pakka

Geet : ha

Ab bilkul nhi rona

Daadi hai na aapke pass

Aryan : hmm

Geet : toh phir.

Geet narrate the story & now both children slept peacefully.

                           ************

Geet : kya huya maan

Maan : kuch nhi

Geet : ab bata bhi do

Maan : both children ask about you, but no one ask about me.

She pulled his cheek.

Maan : geet ,

He glares her, for pulling his cheek.

Geet : mama unki favorite hai na

Isliye

Maan : hmm

Geet : jealousy ho rhi hai

Maan : no way

balki acha laga

mein unhe waqt nhi de pata

pr tum har pal ho unke sath

.

Unki chothi chothi baaton ko bhut achi tarah smjhti  ho

.

Geet in pichle panch saalo mein, mein aapne parivaar ko wo waqt nhi de paaya

Jo mujhe dena chaiye tha

.

Kyi baar lagta hai, pata nhi dad sb kuch itni achi tarah se kaise manage kr lete hai

Aur mein nhi

Geet : sshhh

Asa nhi hai

You are best husband and father too.

.

Aur aap hum sb ka pura dhyan rakhte ho

Smjh aaya aapko

.

He pulled her towards him and encircled his hand around her waist, locking her in his embrace.

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Maan : acha tarah smjh gya madam

She slides her hand around his neck & His fingers teasing her back sensually.

Geet : good

He slammed his lips on her, both kissed each other passionately. He picked her in his arm and put down her on bed.

                             **********

Aryan : daadi daadu kaha hai

Daadi(maan mom)  : wo bs aa rhe hai

Vicky : daadi daadi

Daadi : hum to nhi jaa rhe hai

Tum sb jaayo

Shweta : maa aap kyun nhi chl rhi

Aapki tabiyat toh thik hai na

Daadi : hum kya karenge

Vicky : daadi swimming karenge

Aap aaj bhi unti hi hot lagti ho

She caught his ear.

Vicky : daadi chodo

Daadi : badmaash

Vicky : daadi dard ho rha hai

Daadi : acha hai

Vicky : sorry

Ab to chodo

Daadi : hmm

Mehak : hmare sath maa aur papa nhi aayenge kya

Shweta  : nhi

Hum sb hai na sath

Bhut enjoy karenge

Aur saare jhulle bhi jhulenge

Mehak : hmm

               ***********

 

She made coffee for him and enters into bedroom.  She sits on bed and ruffled his hair.

Geet : maan uttho na

Maan : umm

.

Geet : maan coffee thandi ho jaayengi

He came near to her and placed his hand on her lap.

Geet :  maan

Maan : jaan sone do na

.

Asi subh ab har roz nhi milti

.

Tum yu meri baho mein ho

Geet : acha

.

Par ab mil jaayengi

He snuggled close to her and making pattern on her back.

Geet : maan subh subh badmaashi

Maan : badmaashi nhi jaan

Pyaar kaho

He pulled her head down to make their lips meet.

geet : ma..an..

He softly kissed on her lips & slowly they were lost... he unpin her pallu...

In this between, his phone buzzed.

Geet :  maan phone uthaiye

He sits on bed, she try to stand but he pulled her, she fall on him.

Maan : tumhe bhut hassi aa rhi hai

He rolled her, now he above on her.

Geet : nhi

Maan : really

Geet : hmm

He starts kissing on her neck. She lost into his touch.

                    **************

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@rashmi dear i hope now its ok Wink 

 



Edited by priya_21 - 11 October 2013 at 6:27am

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Posted: 11 October 2013 at 6:34am | IP Logged
it was amazing priyanka. i loved it so much. maan was feeling very bad when children didn't asked about him. but he is happy because geet is giving her whole time to children. after a long time maneet are spending quality time with each other. i am so exited for next dear

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Posted: 11 October 2013 at 6:50am | IP Logged
lovlyyy update do update soon :) 

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Posted: 11 October 2013 at 7:13am | IP Logged
superb update
maan was little bit upset that his kid didn't ask for him & he was not able to give his time to them but geet was always there for them
haaye maaneet saath-2EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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