Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update, read n commented already.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: tammana.m

Osm update😊

hope maan time pe paunch jayy


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ye pics kya past hai ya present plsss tell


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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: monikaseth

awesome update...


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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 9

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Finally I reached.

He see the time its 11:30 p.m.

Aaj to madam ya bhut gussa karengi... ya fir

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He opened the door, he sees she laid down on couch and sleeping. She looks so beautiful in black with golden border sari.

He came & sits near to her and sees her curls disturbing his view which fall on her face.  He tucked her hair & caressed her face.

She opened her eyes & see he sits near to her.

She smile, then realize he actually sits here.

Geet : maan aap kb aaye

Maan : bs abhi

Geet : hmm

Aap phle kpde change kr lijiye

Nhi toh bimar pd jaayenge

.

Mein tb tak khana gharam krti hu

Both stand from couch.

Maan : geet

Wo... mein...aane mein ...late ho gya

Geet : koi meeting aa gyi hongi

Maan : geet ...meri

Geet : maan

Phle ready ho jaaiye

                 **********

He pacing left to right in room.

Aaj to meri baat pe puri sunane tk ko tyaar nhi hai

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In kitchen

Ye koi waqt hai aane ka

Aane ki jaroorat hi kya thi

.

Whi rhte aapne office mein

.

Kuch khehne ka fayda hai inhe

.

Gussa krungi toh ye aur gussa ho jaayenge

.

Aur jo do pal milte hai ek sath khushi se bitane ke wo bhi gusse mein bit jaayenge

.

Wok is more important than me...

               **************

Mein yaha kbse ready hoke inka wait kr rhi hu

Aur ye

Abhi tak nhi aaye

.

Subh kh rhe the

Geet pakka shaam ko hum sb bahar challenge

.

Aur dekho 9 bj gye

Abhi tak nhi aaye...

.

.

He came and sits on bed.

She come near to her and said " ye koi aane ka waqt hai"

Aapne kya kaha tha mujhse kal raat ko

Maan : kya kaha tha geet

He is so much tired due to so hectic schedule.

Geet : ab bhul bhi gye

Maan ab bhut huya

Aap har baar promise krte hai

Humare sath time spend krne ke liye

Aur har baar promise pura nhi krte

Maan : geet baad mein baat krte hai

,

He stands from bed. But he held his hand.

Geet : nhi

Mujhe abhi baat krni hai

Aapko dikhta nhi

Hum teeno kbse aapka wait kr rhe hai

.

Maan kya kaam humse...

.

.

 

Mujhse important hai

Maan : geet kyun har waqt gussa krti ho

Tumhe pata hai na

Kaam ka load jyada hai

Aur

Tum

Geet : tum kya

Work is more important than me

Maan : tumhe jo smjhana hai

Smjh lo

Now I am tired.

Geet : maan

Maan : why you behave liking a kid.

Tumhe dekhke kaun kahenga

You are mother of two children.

.

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At 11:45 p.m

Maan : geet

She came out from thoughts.

Geet : chaliye

Dinner krte hai

.

.

She arranges the dishes on table.

He held her hand and pulled her.

Maan : itni gusaa ho mujhse

Meri baat tk nhi sun rhi

She not meets her eyes to him.

Maan : to meri taraf kyun nhi dekh rhi

Geet : wo bs

He held her chin & meets her eyes to see him.

He see tears in her eyes, which is she trying to hide from him.

Maan : geet tum apne aansu mujhse chuppa rhi ho

Geet : wo bs ase hi aa gye

She wipes her tears.

Aap baithye na

Maan : sshhh

He placed index finger on her lips, she clutched his shirt.

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Maan : geet am sorry

Mein time pe ghar aa gya tha

Socha tha

Sath mein time spend karenge

Pr ghar pe koi nhi tha

Mujhe pata chale sb bahar gye hai

.

Toh mujhe laga tum bhi unke sath hi hongi

Geet : aap ko asa kaise lag sakta hai

Mein yaha kbse aapka wait kr rhi hu

.

Aur mein khi bhi jaati hu

Toh aapko batati hu na

.

Ek phone toh kr sakte the na aap mujhe

Maan : geet tum yaha aa rhi ho

Tumne mujhe bataya

Geet : wo toh baki sbka plan tha

Hamari anniversary ke liye

Dad ne kaha tha who aapko bata denge

Both see together towards watch.

Time: - 11:59 p.m

 

 ''I Feel you entered in my life like an Angel ,When you spend time 


with me, I Feel i have no sorrows in my life, time is spent as fast 

as blow of wind '

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Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awe... In their bickering they are going to miss wishing each other.  Hope they talk after this. That is what they need desperately
Waiting eagerly for next update.  Hope she starts behaving like before

Loved the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Grrr
beech me hi rok diya.kam se kam meri update ke barabar to diya kar

agar agli baar itni chhoti comment di to mujhse maar khaayegi

update was cute. I loved Get ka gussa 
She was waiting for him and maan ka manaanna
lovely update 
but meri warning ko dhyaan me rakhna😆😆
Edited by rashmivaish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi dear! Fab update! Past well incorporated! They are nw arguing! hope they will be able to celebrate! update soon, well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsem update bickering but emotional gap
Edited by tamanna1391 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
priyanka it was amazing. finally maan reached to geet. geet is angry but not showing. i hope they celebrate their anniversary instead of fighting again. waiting for next dear