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Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 (Page 98)

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Posted: 05 March 2014 at 12:14am | IP Logged
Really new concept..its character esp arnav is really complicated.looking forward for next update.

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Posted: 05 March 2014 at 3:50am | IP Logged

Awesome update...So Arnav starting to open himself towards her is a very big step...he is trusting her hope she will not break his trust...Aman playing the mediator even if unintentionally...I hope for a good relation between them...written beautifully...

 

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Posted: 05 March 2014 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Awsum update loved it
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Posted: 05 March 2014 at 11:15am | IP Logged
I am just loving this story. Its so different and keeps the reader engrossed.
The relations between Arnav and Khushi is slowly developing.
Arnav is almost observing everything about Khushi and Khushi on her part too is sometimes shocked and sometimes surprised at Arnav's behaviour.
Looks like Khushi is the lucky charm for Arnav. From the time she has entered his life, he and his team are playing well.

I loved the scene where she was enjoying her ice cream and Arnav was just staring at her.

Who is this Nick Thomas?? What are his intentions towards Khushi???


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Posted: 05 March 2014 at 3:27pm | IP Logged
Amazing and superb update, I absolutely loved it.

A fantastic read from start to finish, 

Honestly I'm just loving you perfect and beautiful descriptions of the place they are currently in, it's tempting me too book a flight to India, lol.

I'm loving Aman he will definitely play Cupid between Arnav and Khushi and I'm so glad he made Khushi join them. 

Arnav has definitely been observing Khushi quite a lot when ever he sees her and it nice to see him checking her out at the table.

Loved her direct and excellent answer to Aman when she spoke about the article Arnav did not contribute towards, I'm glad Aman is going to make Arnav re-do it again.

Wow the way Arnav was looking at Khushi when she ate her dessert was so amazing, it's made me crave for a chocolate dessert, lol.

Arnav using innuendos with a innocent Khushi was funny, lol. 

I'm glad they managed to have a normal and civil conversation with Khushi learning quite a few interesting facts about him and she also saw a very different side to him. 

It was nice to read the match went well and Khushi learnt approaching Arnav after the match was a lot better, I can't wait to read more interactions between them.

The update was written exceptionally well,

Thanks for the PM xx

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Posted: 05 March 2014 at 8:05pm | IP Logged
Very interesting update .Why so late dear , I love this story.
Khushiis getting what she wants and he is being so nice and greek God for her.hmmm

Lets see what Khushi will do for the rest of the time.

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Posted: 05 March 2014 at 8:43pm | IP Logged
reserved :) 
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Posted: 06 March 2014 at 6:14am | IP Logged
This was such a well written and detailed update.  I learned so much about city of Kolkata and the game of cricket, both new to me.
You have also  developed Arnav, Khushi and Aman's characters so well that each one of them now has a distinct and very interesting personality and now on their way to actually have a relationship.  Aman's damage control ploy is working.  

Just like Khushi, I am glad to discover that Arnav is not the douchebag I thought he was.  Arnav now notices everything about Khushi and is a little piqued that she was acting reserved with him.

Loved Khushi's desert by the waywayWink.

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