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Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 (Page 97)

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 7:30pm | IP Logged
did you really need to bring in the slime, the snake.  the story was going so well!Ouch

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 7:39pm | IP Logged
wndrfl updt
snakewa here Shocked

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 8:04pm | IP Logged
I loved the entire chapter, there is something about the way you write that makes me visualise the whole thing so easily.

I am glad that the positivity around him is giving him the opportunity to introspect and think about his life both professional and personal. 

I am glad he does not feel the pressure and stress of his personal life that had been having a negative impact and he is taking corrective steps. 

Thinking about his relationship with La and the uncommon grounds it was built on, making him realise why he was even in that relationship. And I am glad he decides to call it off with her given that both know it is not working out and is meeting the needs of neither. 
I am glad La takes it well. 

I am so glad he realises that she is indeed a distraction to him, realising that there is something about her that makes him think of her constantly and I liked it that this thought came in his mind when he was thinking about his relationship with La and how her absence in his life did not affect him like it should and in contrast to his thought about Khushi..

The pressure on her still strong from her evil and unscrupulous boss, but I keep getting more confident that she will handle him with brilliance when the time is correct .

The feeling of victory and the euphoria connected with it giving him a sense of contentment and his self esteem, which further reflects in his mood and disposition which eventually results in his lighthearted banter with Khushi.

 I like that he laughs with her and that their conversation is a step in the right direction, a personal one in which he gets to know more about her. I liked that she asks about Aman. I liked her confusion about how to address him , after that night in Calcutta...that was so natural. Given their relationship...I liked that she felt at ease with him though. A big step, 

Now who is this new person spying and warning her off  him and why ? 

Waiting for some action on the field and off...


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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 9:59pm | IP Logged
Glad that Arnav has broken up with Lavanya & he is playing so well. !!

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
I loved this part...specially the Arnav Khushi conversation...
It was interesting...Clap
Looking forward to read more...Smile

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
For your Q's.
No problem with the story, contents and pace. Good work.

Lovely chapter that showed, easy rapport between Arnav and Khushi, exit of La, entry of awareness of Khushi in Arnav, entry of the snake-Shyamwa into the scene!

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Posted: 16 March 2014 at 12:30am | IP Logged
I read it in 1 go, n I luv it
arnav being a cricketer n khushi being a reporter
arnav attending anger management for his action, much needed
I jst hope khushi doesn't reveal abt arnav's personal life
 
 


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Posted: 16 March 2014 at 1:19am | IP Logged
Superb update !!! Indians won.. happy for arnav.. loved the update.. Big smile

thanks for pm Smile

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