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Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 (Page 89)

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Posted: 04 March 2014 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
Can feel the comfort  level growing between them...I think Arnav is getting very conscious around her, and is attracted to her!

Your update are amazing...like a magnetic pull...want to read more and more!




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Posted: 04 March 2014 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
Great update! Nice to see a more relaxed and laid back Arnav. Seems like he comes out when she's there.

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Posted: 04 March 2014 at 4:19pm | IP Logged
The distance  she maintains after his apology gets Arnav's attention to Khushi. Interesting turn of events. When she was trying to get an interview from him he completely uncooperative and pushes up her take up a project she never wanted in first place. Now she's getting his attention which will make her task easier but conscience harder. Waiting to what you planed to this story. Thx for writing about IPL teams b'cos other than world cup I've lost touch in cricket it's really nice to know about different teams. Thx 4 d PM.

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Posted: 04 March 2014 at 4:45pm | IP Logged
fabulous update
loved it
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 04 March 2014 at 5:35pm | IP Logged
Awesome chapter...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 04 March 2014 at 10:30pm | IP Logged
Amazing update

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Posted: 04 March 2014 at 11:01pm | IP Logged
Awesome story!!! Please update more often... Thanx!!!

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Posted: 05 March 2014 at 12:09am | IP Logged
This story is always a nice read... Very different form the rest! I loved the pace of your writing and so do I love the seamless flow of this story. So much detailing about cricket and the IPL... about cities and its specialities... This is a total travel treat... topped up with a brooding Arnav and a smart Khushi. 

Loved how things have proceeded for both Arnav and Khushi since the last time they met and spoke. I guess breaking the ice was good for both of them. The atmosphere seems to be nice and happy one on field and off field as well. I like this Aman who looks out for ASR all the time..n and is least affected by his sarcasm.

I am glad that Khushi managed to be at the right place at the right time, joining Arnav and Aman for their dinner. The whole set-up, the conversation and Khushi's bindaas attitude was fun to read. Loved the way Arnav noticed every minute flick of emotion on her oh-so-expressive face.

And then the dessert scene.. 'you have something there..' Hayye!! Why ahd Aman to disturb them!! Loved their conversation... his innuendo and her shock at being at the receiving end. Things seem to be changing between the two rapidly and he is definitely opening up to her... I just hope Khushi does not hurt him for her assignment!!

Waiting for more... like always!! Embarrassed


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