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Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 (Page 89)

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Posted: 16 February 2014 at 10:04am | IP Logged
loved the scene between the kids and arnav. got to see a more human side to arnav which is a change! I am very intrigued with his home situation. Especially as aman believes cricket to be the only thing that keeps arnav sane.

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Posted: 16 February 2014 at 10:05am | IP Logged
loved it

that was awesome

arnav and khushi somehow ended at the same place and the same time

i loved the way arnav challenged khushi
she got to see a new side of arnav

i really like the way arnav was with kids
he was just arnav then

he apologized for his behaviour and khushi forgave him

arjav back in game

for sure something's changed between them

will be waiting for the next update

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Posted: 16 February 2014 at 4:26pm | IP Logged
Wow an amazing and simply superb update,

We got such a long update to read, such a pleasure.

I'm loving the fact Aman came to see Arnav and spoke to him and gave him some fantastic advice, 

So Khushi has decided to take up the assignment and confirmed it with her boss, but I'm happy too read that she has decided that she will not compromise with her morals.

Awww love the fact Arnav played and teached the kids at the orphanage on how to play cricket that was a sweet gesture,

Love the fact Arnav and Khushi accidentally met each other in park and I love the way Arnav challenged her to play. 

So glad Arnav apologised and bless Khushi was left completely stunned and shocked, lol. 

I'm glad Arnav played a lot better in the cricket match, even though the team lost he should be proud with the score and even Khushi was so excited whilst watching the team play. 

The update was written exceptionally well,

A brilliant read and wonderful writing,

Thanks for the PM xx 

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Posted: 16 February 2014 at 7:33pm | IP Logged
Loved it...

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Posted: 16 February 2014 at 8:23pm | IP Logged
A_BA, 
Lovely, long update ... The story is flowing smoothly ... Lovely your easy descriptive style of writing ... 

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Posted: 16 February 2014 at 10:18pm | IP Logged
will she get a glimpse of the real man behind his public persona

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Posted: 16 February 2014 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
Yes my team won...
A very nice update with everything coming along perfectly far from the grounds it was nice to see a different side to them and their interaction . The entire conversation and incident with Khushi weighing heavily on his mind and conscious , clearly not a bad or mean person even he could not justify his outburst and that affected his game and once he was able to relax and get if off his chest,the guilt making way for his ability to concentrate on the game ...I liked that you did not make them win, but atleast they were playing good cricket and his game upto par. 

It was a nice insight into their lives and aspirations, their emotions and their similarities, both wanted to make something of themselves and both determined...they are both similar in a lot of ways .

I liked how he wants her to join them and the way he smartly challenges her knowing it might make her join them. 

I trust her to take the correct decision when the time comes one which will not slow her to compromise her morals ...

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Posted: 17 February 2014 at 1:02am | IP Logged

Superb update...equations are changing between them...interesting...Khushi is accepting things from her boss but doing it on her own way...glad that Arnav realized his mistake and apologized her...So Khushi started effecting him...oh...I love it...I loved the way you described everything...very well written...please update soon.

 

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