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Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 (Page 83)

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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Awsome chapter!
poor khushi She had to give In!
I know she'll succed In It coz arnav has a soft corner For so their is no doubt about it!
Arnav will be heartbroken And khushi being the good soul she is will be too but thats in future!
It seems is destiny's play!
I hope when Arnav open ups Khushi should Tell About this to arnav a lot can be avoided!
Its evident arnav has suffered a lot and Then this Poor Him!
Anyways Update next soon :)!
Keep writing :D!

Edited by misscutegirl - 16 February 2014 at 9:35am

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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 2:21am | IP Logged
Finally caught up with your story! Its amazing and totally awesome! 
Loving it so much, please continue soon. 


Edited by ...Ashley - 15 February 2014 at 2:21am

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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 2:24am | IP Logged
Wow!
Loosing two matches in a row!
Slide for MI's???
But will the tide turn?
Personally it has for ASR but the team?
Lovely update. Progress has been made in Arnav-Khushi front and the game of cricket has truly laid foundation for the bridge of amity!


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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 2:53am | IP Logged
Loved it.
well done
Thanks for pm...
Update soon

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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 2:58am | IP Logged
loved it Clap

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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 3:01am | IP Logged
loved d update

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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 3:22am | IP Logged
That was wonderful Update...

Glad that Arnav realized his mistake and asked Kushi's forgiveness...

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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 3:23am | IP Logged

First of all sorry for the late unres

You know what i love about this story! That how much close to reality you have kept it! That how you hve paid attention to facts and everything is so amazingly written that i for me the line between reel and real has actually blurred! Sometimes i even forget that ASR is not a real player and is just a fictitious character!
So really hats off to you ya!!

Secondly achcha i thgt that Arnav was already a player of indian cricket team! So he is not? Has he just started his career here in india?
It was lovely to see khushi reliving her college years with her friend! N how just randomly m coincidently she met Arnav?

N it was good that finally Mr ASR apologised to khushi ! But you know its really hard for me to digest the fact that Arnav's poor performance in match with Royals can be attributed to ,even if a part , to his guilt and anguish over his behaviour towards khushi! I mean wen on field thy are thorough professionals! Their mind is only on the game!
However its a known fact too that cricketers seldom play well on their home grounds!

Oh yes! Khushi finally accepted the challenge! It woulD be interesting to see what happens next and how khushi will handle everything wen she will fall fr Arnav!

A Very well written chapter!! Waiting for the next part!

Edited by Nandz - 17 February 2014 at 11:42am

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