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Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 (Page 82)

Arshicraze13 Senior Member
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Posted: 16 February 2014 at 12:06am | IP Logged
Superb update loved it finally they are in truce wonder what will b khushi's next step to come in arnav's good book

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Posted: 16 February 2014 at 4:39am | IP Logged
You write wonderfully!! I can't believe the chapter ended already!! Loved it:)

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Posted: 16 February 2014 at 4:47am | IP Logged
Nice update..lovin arnav n khushi small talks..
Arnavs childhood dream to became a cricketer...his difficulties while achiveing his goals wer nicely describe..
Dat playfull arnav hints r cumin back frm dat small convo in park..
Waiting fr update!!
Smile Big smile

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Posted: 16 February 2014 at 10:04am | IP Logged
loved the scene between the kids and arnav. got to see a more human side to arnav which is a change! I am very intrigued with his home situation. Especially as aman believes cricket to be the only thing that keeps arnav sane.

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Posted: 16 February 2014 at 10:05am | IP Logged
loved it

that was awesome

arnav and khushi somehow ended at the same place and the same time

i loved the way arnav challenged khushi
she got to see a new side of arnav

i really like the way arnav was with kids
he was just arnav then

he apologized for his behaviour and khushi forgave him

arjav back in game

for sure something's changed between them

will be waiting for the next update

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Posted: 16 February 2014 at 4:26pm | IP Logged
Wow an amazing and simply superb update,

We got such a long update to read, such a pleasure.

I'm loving the fact Aman came to see Arnav and spoke to him and gave him some fantastic advice, 

So Khushi has decided to take up the assignment and confirmed it with her boss, but I'm happy too read that she has decided that she will not compromise with her morals.

Awww love the fact Arnav played and teached the kids at the orphanage on how to play cricket that was a sweet gesture,

Love the fact Arnav and Khushi accidentally met each other in park and I love the way Arnav challenged her to play. 

So glad Arnav apologised and bless Khushi was left completely stunned and shocked, lol. 

I'm glad Arnav played a lot better in the cricket match, even though the team lost he should be proud with the score and even Khushi was so excited whilst watching the team play. 

The update was written exceptionally well,

A brilliant read and wonderful writing,

Thanks for the PM xx 

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Posted: 16 February 2014 at 8:23pm | IP Logged
A_BA, 
Lovely, long update ... The story is flowing smoothly ... Lovely your easy descriptive style of writing ... 

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Posted: 16 February 2014 at 10:18pm | IP Logged
will she get a glimpse of the real man behind his public persona

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