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Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 (Page 81)

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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 11:36am | IP Logged
Your writing is so amazing..love how you puts words so nicely into your story...

Felt as if a friendship is slowing brewing up between them...it's just through the eyes...I feel!

So eager to see how Khushi is going to move forward...archiving her goals...and keeping her morals in mind ...waiting for Arnav to have feelings for her...how would that be...so anxious to know what will happen...

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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Very nice chapter.. Arnav's Behavior with kids and after that with Khushi was very genuine.. Loved reading about cricket match..its very well written chapter SmileClap

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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 11:46am | IP Logged
This is Bliss!

Cricket+IPL+ Arnav+khushi! This is my personal haven!
I love the stor, esepcially how you detail it.
Bits of their lifestyle, their families, friends, past and places. Such a good and measured combination of everything.

While he, enjoys his time with the kids, feeling free and natural, she came. And i loved how Arnav challenged her and then apologised to her, now thats what Arnav is.

This update from start till end, spoke of an entirely different side of Arnav.. Which is free, smiling, good and hardworking and focused.


His emotions affect his play. He performed well!! Even though they lost, he stood out, now thats what we call an achiever! ;)

last season MI won IPL, so going by the trend, here also MI would win. Only i wonder if this star player ASR here is Rohit sharma inspired? - he was the indian batsman consistent for MI last year.

As for Khushi, i'd say, enjoying cricket is something we Indians have in our blood, a good crowd and a good match is all what it needs to turn on the interest. ;)

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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
What a complex man he is.
Good to see him rectifying  his mistakes.

Khushi is really going to have a tough time with this job.
Hoping she stays true to the promise she made to herself.

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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
Awesome update!!! Hopefully Khushi will not finish her assignment as Arnav would feel betrayed!!

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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 4:05pm | IP Logged
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I just love this story way too much
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I'm loving it...wanna read more...thanks for the pm...

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