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Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 (Page 78)

Nandz Goldie
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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 3:23am | IP Logged

First of all sorry for the late unres

You know what i love about this story! That how much close to reality you have kept it! That how you hve paid attention to facts and everything is so amazingly written that i for me the line between reel and real has actually blurred! Sometimes i even forget that ASR is not a real player and is just a fictitious character!
So really hats off to you ya!!

Secondly achcha i thgt that Arnav was already a player of indian cricket team! So he is not? Has he just started his career here in india?
It was lovely to see khushi reliving her college years with her friend! N how just randomly m coincidently she met Arnav?

N it was good that finally Mr ASR apologised to khushi ! But you know its really hard for me to digest the fact that Arnav's poor performance in match with Royals can be attributed to ,even if a part , to his guilt and anguish over his behaviour towards khushi! I mean wen on field thy are thorough professionals! Their mind is only on the game!
However its a known fact too that cricketers seldom play well on their home grounds!

Oh yes! Khushi finally accepted the challenge! It woulD be interesting to see what happens next and how khushi will handle everything wen she will fall fr Arnav!

A Very well written chapter!! Waiting for the next part!

Edited by Nandz - 17 February 2014 at 11:42am

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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 3:31am | IP Logged
I love ur writing. An Awakening was awesome n nw this is really good Smile
Looking forward to more

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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 3:54am | IP Logged
i agree that this opportunity will help arnav open up more

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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 4:24am | IP Logged
Another awesome update!!
Super pakka!!!
Brilliant!!!
I hope things changes soon!!
Please cont soon!!

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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 4:28am | IP Logged
superb update...equations are changing between them..I feeling like that later Arnav is going to consider these encounters as Khushi's plan.

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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 4:34am | IP Logged
I am sorry for not commenting on the last two updates, but I will try to be more regular from now on. I read the three updates in succession and it left me wanting for more. You have weaved the tale very cleverly, and I am curious to see what happens next.

Khushi taking up on her senior's offer was a practical decision but I am sure it won't prove to be an easy one later, especially when it has Arnav standing at the other end. There was a sinking feeling in the pit of my stomach when I could see, not very explicitly of course, Arnav warming up to Khushi, albeit very little. It left me smiling widely that he performed well after he had cleared the air with her. What's more to come?

The pace of the story is just perfect, I am very glad it's not rushed and till now there are just hints of a friendship that will bloom between them.

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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 5:42am | IP Logged
superb update
loved it
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 15 February 2014 at 5:56am | IP Logged
lovely chapter as usual...

so kushi accepted his boss offer, but do things in her way...but the path is so difficult kushi ki bacchiBig smile...

liked the way arnav apologize to kushi,he knows he has to apolagize for his wrong behavior and he did...feel good to read that kushi was able to see different side of arnav and the way he is playing with kids...she thinks that he is soo different...

and arnav too played well in the game.can not wait to read how kushi will interview arnav...

thank u for the update and pm...

cheers...



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