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Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 - Page 77

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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update.
they are getting along with ease. 
i enjoyed reading it
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Posted: 10 years ago
So Arnav is out of the relationship with Lavanya...and he is admitted that his mind and thoughts have been distracted not by Lavanya but by Khushi...loved their conversation...is the stranger is Shyam...loved the update.
Regarding the note...I have no complaints and I am loving it... 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice chp..feeling happy to see a diff asr in dis chp..it was unexpected!!
😊 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing and superb update,

I absolutely loved the update, it was a brilliant read. 

I'm glad Arnav took the honest route and decided to end things with Lavanya as he know the relationship had no future.

Khushi tried acting smart with her manager by saying Arnav is bore and there nothing interesting to write about him but Ashok is not going let it go.

Arnav attending his anger management session and I love the way his advisor gave him a good reply to his answer, 

Wow they actually won the game and bless Arnav just reforms into a different person and he is more active and approachable to the journalists, 

Loved the conversation between Arnav and Khushi, khushi's genuine concern about Aman was sweet. 

Khushi loved the fact that Arnav seems like a different person when he genuinely laughs, 

I wonder who the person is that warned Khushi, I have feeling when you wrote slimy snake it might be Shyam. 

The update was written exceptionally well,

Thanks for the PM xx 
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Another really wonderful update ... Love the pace of the story and the details ... Lavanya is out and Khushi is making small inroads ... Pm nothing like a paced romance ... The new man ... A rival cricketer ? Shayam ... Lovely cliff hanger ... Lovely bit of writing ... Thans so much  
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Posted: 10 years ago
u r wonderful writer
I read this ff quite late all chaps together I loved it
new concept pretty much new from tycoon title but still ASR flavor  is there
khushi is also good la's chap is ended here so coast is clear 
I personally want more arshi moment then cricket I hope u don't mind because im not big fan of the game
but  u r the writer so u n have full faith on ur writing skills keep it up
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice one 👏
So La is out and Khushi is seeping in his skin but slowly.

Good one a new jealous player...Shyam is entering the the league of Love.

Kjhushi hesitates ...hmmm...that is interesting to see how it will fold out.

Thnx for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update! So Arnav put end to his relationship with Lavanya. Now can't wait for Arnav and kushis journey:-) :-)
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
i think guy at end is shyam
i know u had not mention shyam name till now
but refering tos snake i remember only shyam hahha
thnx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
is he Shyam...
ohhh god plzzz..i don't want him in this story