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Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 (Page 68)

IronButterfly IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 30 January 2014 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
It was a relationship of convenience with Lavanya and such relationships do come to an end soon.

So Khushi has taken over his thoughts.

Khushi's battle with herself was a natural one and i think her decision was quite natural.

Really like how you have kept things real.

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hararnav IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 30 January 2014 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
nice update..
finally glimpse of arnavs personal life.. lavanya..
though we cant blame her for asking arnav to spend more time, but it was not a problem before and just coz they r in same city its not fair to ask him for more... she shud give him his space...

will khushi be able to get the details following arnav?? will he accept the lift from her?

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amaypranay IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 30 January 2014 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
Loving this story...Feels very realistic ...

Arnav seems a very deep and very interesting character here...so much going on...


What a coincidence...he's trying to stay away from her...and here she is ...right in front of him...I hope he takes the lift...it would work well...



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Posted: 30 January 2014 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
Awesome updates!!! Read 5th and 6th chapters, hate Ashok he is such a sleaze ball!!!! You described all the places in Jaipur so well, just want to see what happens next. I just hope that Khushi will not compromise in her morals and deceive Aarnav as it seems that he already has trust issues. Please can you pm me when you update next, I sent you friend request!!!!

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Bavari Goldie
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Posted: 30 January 2014 at 3:09pm | IP Logged
Nice update. Is Arnav's reaction to ride sharing offer going to make her decision to Ashok's offer. Waiting to know. Thx  4 d PM.

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Posted: 30 January 2014 at 4:17pm | IP Logged
Amazing and superb update,

So things have not been going to well between Lavanya and Arnav, I thinks it's true he should not string her along especially now his journey towards love might begin with Khushi, lol.

Khushi has decided to go to Jaipur and conduct her assignment I just hope she does not end up breaking Arnav's trust and what ever information he does finally disclose to her will be kept in confidence and I'm sure Khushi will know what information too disclose only.

I personally think her family and friends will be disappointment if she does this assignment under the pretence of deceit, however I trust Khushi once she gets to know Arnav a lot better she will make the right decision.

I'm loving your descriptive and wonderful description of Jaipur it seems like a beautiful place especially for sightseeing.

I was so wanting Arnav and Khushi to meet once they were out sightseeing but it's shame Arnav ran away as soon as he saw Khushi.

Awww love the fact Khushi asked Arnav to join her for the car ride, can't wait to read how the rest of the car journey will entail. 

The update was a brilliant read, amazing writing.

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx


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Bhavz21_ArShi Senior Member
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Posted: 30 January 2014 at 5:04pm | IP Logged
Great update
Thanks for PM :)

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Ipoona Goldie
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Posted: 30 January 2014 at 7:20pm | IP Logged
A_BA, 
Beautifully written ... I have not read the first five chapters ... Would love to read them ... Truly well writing, your language, effortless, your style laid back ... Loved it ... Thanks for the PM ... 

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