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Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 (Page 19)

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Posted: 03 October 2013 at 8:00am | IP Logged
# Prologue.

The Prologue was interesting. It was amazing to read Arnav as a cricketer. It is a very, very fresh concept! Clap

So, he landed himself in trouble! :O

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Posted: 03 October 2013 at 8:11am | IP Logged
# 1

That is bad- Arnav going through a rough patch. I wonder why he isn't in his form.

The stupid questions of journalists worsened the situation. It was like sprinkling salt over his raw wound.
To tell the truth, the journalist deserved the punch.

The BCCI didn't decide to suspend him- atleast this was his saving grace.

I'm glad that his coach decided to stand by him.

Aman's character is impressive.

I'm in awe of your succinct information about cricket which you have given here.


Edited by greenMoss - 03 October 2013 at 8:11am

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# 2

Khushi is a journalist!
And she belongs from an affluent family of Lucknow. Thank God! Arnav will perhaps think twice before throwing the "middle-class" craps at her.

Ashok knows how to play his cards well! He managed to convince Khushi to go to the field.

Khushi didn't know about the high profile cricketer-Arnav! :O

Arnav secured 25 runs. Is Khushi his lucky charm here? Wink Reminds me of the book "The Zoya Factor".

Khushi and Arnav's meeting scene was very cliched but believable though. People can slip when there is water on the floor!

I like Khushi's personality- independent, strong-willed, confident, today's woman, head-strong and educated enough not to pronounce 'phone' as 'pone'!

Now, that the scene is set, I'm eager to know what Khushi will ask and what answers he'll give.

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Posted: 03 October 2013 at 8:40am | IP Logged
All thanks to Shruti21, that I came across your story.

It's very refreshing to read stories where Arnav, just for a change, isn't a business tycoon.

Somewhere I guessed at the beginning of Ch 1, that Khushi is perhaps a journalist, because journalism is the only job which can make her meet a star cricketer i.e. Arnav!

Your lucid and succinct prose is great to read!

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Posted: 03 October 2013 at 10:54am | IP Logged
Loved the story ... Quite different from the other Arshi stories... Waiting for more :) 
Have sent a buddy request. Pls do PM once you update the story.

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Posted: 03 October 2013 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
entirely new theme.
Loved it.
R u a sports person?
Cntn sn.

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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 7:14am | IP Logged

Amazing parts!!!

Just read chapter 1and 2, loved to know that Arnav is the cricketer and Khushi is the news reporter...

I really don't like when reporter get very personal about other lives but know that their job...but of course Arnav doesn't like that!

So Khushi is going to be interviewing him and already on her first day she has landed herself in her armsEmbarrassed

Now can't wait to know where this story leads...

Just love the different and unique concept...

 Your have really don't a lot of research for this story, well written and brilliantly expressed!!!
Eagerly waiting for,more...

Thanks for the pm..,


Edited by Hawa1997 - 04 October 2013 at 7:14am

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Posted: 14 October 2013 at 6:08am | IP Logged
i wanna read this one!
Writer ji start updating this soon :P

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