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Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 (Page 15)

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 1:07am | IP Logged

Beautiful Update...

Loved the Kushi's entry and Arshi's first meet is too goodDay Dreaming

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 2:44am | IP Logged
Its bcomin mre n mre interesting.. Loved it

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 3:35am | IP Logged
Loved Khushi's entry! 
Having read everybody's comments, I too thought that she'd be his anger management therapist. But this is definitely better Big smileThumbs Up

Also, I love the description you gave for Khushi and her thoughts. Made her seem... real somehow. Very believable and relatable. Really appreciate that. 

Loved the seen where she walks in to the men' locker room Embarrassed  and ooh the slip and catch!

Really looking forward to read more. 

Good stuff, this is. 

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 5:29am | IP Logged
Superb part.. 

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
loved it
that was just amazing
well i really like this khushi
her intriduction was juat superb
so she is the only person who doean't know the ASR
waiting for the next update
continue soon

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 4:12pm | IP Logged

Interesting part..thanks for the PM

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 9:20pm | IP Logged
read the prologue and the 2 chapters...very interesting and different from all the stories i've read here...loved it and eager to read more...

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 3:03am | IP Logged
simply loved khushi's introduction in the story! she sounds like one amazing independent and mature young girl.

awesome update! n im sure its arnav who caught her!

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