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Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 (Page 124)

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Posted: 22 March 2014 at 10:23am | IP Logged
So, Aakash is attracted to Payal.
Liked the conversation between Arnav and Khushi.
I don't want Khushi to betray Arnav.
The poor guy doesn't need it.

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Posted: 22 March 2014 at 10:40am | IP Logged
It's not going to end up well when he finds out about Khushi's boss's plan - which I fear is inevitable. 
He will feel really betrayed as it will squash his fledgling trust in journalists. 

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Posted: 22 March 2014 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Hugaweosme dear 
thank u for pm 

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Posted: 22 March 2014 at 11:45am | IP Logged
Enjoying this story so much!Big smile

Khushi is fighting with her conscience and morals constantly. While Arnav has his own set of problems. add desire for Khushi to them! ;)

While Akash has surely found his match in Payal. Just lovely!
Atleast someone has his wheels going. :) 

But who was that man who gave Khushi the warning?
I hope you reveal it soon and whoever that was, had best interest in his mind.

Waiting for the next chapter.Smile

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Posted: 22 March 2014 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 22 March 2014 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Hello dear!
I came across your story today. Have seen your comments on few of the stories I follow regularly. It was a pleasure to read Outside the lines. Enjoyed the concept and various backdrops you are using to progress the story. Cricket player- Journalist combinations rocks..

There is a charm in the professional dealings..especially of Mr. Aman, and Mr. Ashok. They feel so real to me. While I understand the naivety of Khushi and guarded Arnav. There were really some sweet moments which I greatly enjoyed so far. The locker room first slip-catch- eyelock meeting, Calcutta-desert-conversation-&almost swipe of chocolate sticking out scene. Then the victory of defeating Bangalore team-locker room-laughing scene. 

I am looking forward to future updates. Good going...

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Posted: 22 March 2014 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rk2127

Oft the physical attraction tendency has just been increased many notches and this girl also click to intellectual level all in all ASR is getting a really good companion from the 'enemy group' that he doesn't want to bow down to the sign from his brain of staying away.

He got jealous with the intern being Khushi's date? That's why he left. Really!

Wow, "I was in the middle before I know it has begun." Mr. Darcy P&P. good job ASR.

Their light banter and easy comrade was nice. So he has prejudice for journalist considering them as the reason to his parent early demise. Wonder what will be his reaction if and when the piece on him will be published pened by KKG?

Khushi didn't like is early and sudden departure and not sure of the reason why. Well 'Aag Dono Taraf Baraber Lagi Hai' Wink

Continue soon would like to read Arnav thoughts of being jealous Wink


I love that quote from P&P - I read the book so many years ago that I don't remember it but it's a lovely quote (you're inspiring me to re-read the book now!!)

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Posted: 22 March 2014 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anjs

hey

though i love to read the whole chapter in one go, but if breaking it into parts means quicker updates then m all for it...

chapter was fabulous...Arnav opening atleast a little to Khushi was good...he keeps thinking bt her, dont like to see her with others, but doesnt know why,...is that the reason he left abruptly when vinay barged into their little chat...

Its good that Arnav started feeling more bt Khushi now, since LA is not in the picture...doesnt make him look like a cheater...but was Khushi the reason for him to breakup...i think it was subconciously...though even  he isnt aware of it


Thank you for your comments!

I just want to clear up that Arnav did not break up with Lavanya because of Khushi. To him, she's still a stranger (albeit one that he is attracted to), so she can't affect him to that level yet. However, thinking of her constantly made him realize that not once did he think of missing his girlfriend while he was on the road, and that made him re-evaluate the relationship and why they were still together. Hope that makes sense!!! And yes, like you, I don't like the image of him as a cheater, so Lavanya had to get out of the way before Khushi can fully come into the picture!!

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