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Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 (Page 110)

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Posted: 17 March 2014 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Lovely update! Nice to see this positive side to Arnav. All the winnings and his time with a certain young lady is having a good affect on him. He's first anger management meeting, and he comes out wondering why he is in there in the first place! That was too funny.

Oh khushi! What has she got herself into?!!!

Do continue soon!

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Posted: 17 March 2014 at 11:41am | IP Logged
lovely update.
they are getting along with ease. 
i enjoyed reading it

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Posted: 17 March 2014 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
So Arnav is out of the relationship with Lavanya...and he is admitted that his mind and thoughts have been distracted not by Lavanya but by Khushi...loved their conversation...is the stranger is Shyam...loved the update.
Regarding the note...I have no complaints and I am loving it... Tongue
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Posted: 17 March 2014 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
Nice chp..feeling happy to see a diff asr in dis chp..it was unexpected!!
Smile Big smile

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Posted: 17 March 2014 at 4:24pm | IP Logged
Amazing and superb update,

I absolutely loved the update, it was a brilliant read. 

I'm glad Arnav took the honest route and decided to end things with Lavanya as he know the relationship had no future.

Khushi tried acting smart with her manager by saying Arnav is bore and there nothing interesting to write about him but Ashok is not going let it go.

Arnav attending his anger management session and I love the way his advisor gave him a good reply to his answer, 

Wow they actually won the game and bless Arnav just reforms into a different person and he is more active and approachable to the journalists, 

Loved the conversation between Arnav and Khushi, khushi's genuine concern about Aman was sweet. 

Khushi loved the fact that Arnav seems like a different person when he genuinely laughs, 

I wonder who the person is that warned Khushi, I have feeling when you wrote slimy snake it might be Shyam. 

The update was written exceptionally well,

Thanks for the PM xx 

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Posted: 17 March 2014 at 6:49pm | IP Logged
Nice update

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Posted: 17 March 2014 at 7:22pm | IP Logged
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Another really wonderful update ... Love the pace of the story and the details ... Lavanya is out and Khushi is making small inroads ... Pm nothing like a paced romance ... The new man ... A rival cricketer ? Shayam ... Lovely cliff hanger ... Lovely bit of writing ... Thans so much  

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Posted: 17 March 2014 at 8:23pm | IP Logged
u r wonderful writer
I read this ff quite late all chaps together I loved it
new concept pretty much new from tycoon title but still ASR flavor  is there
khushi is also good la's chap is ended here so coast is clear 
I personally want more arshi moment then cricket I hope u don't mind because im not big fan of the game
but  u r the writer so u n have full faith on ur writing skills keep it up

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