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Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 (Page 105)

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 5:18pm | IP Logged
Amazing update so glad arnav and Khushi talking normally
I am loving the way you write every detail think it's much needed

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 5:28pm | IP Logged
Nice update
Thanks for PM :)

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 5:41pm | IP Logged
Who was that warning her I wonder

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 5:48pm | IP Logged
Awesome update!!! Indians are making progress in their game while Arshi is making progress in the relationship lol!!!

I still feel that Khushi should not do the expose on Arnav, maybe she will not do it in the end!!! Hmm do they share ant other connection ????

Do I sense Shyamji's entry in the story?? What is a good story without a villain right Big smile

Answered your questions on pg 103.


Edited by anu1017 - 15 March 2014 at 5:48pm

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 7:24pm | IP Logged
Nice one. ASR playing well  Mumbai Indians are winning , arnav saying bye bye to Lavanya hello hi to Khushi all good until slimy creature shows his head. Thx 4 d PM.

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 7:30pm | IP Logged
did you really need to bring in the slime, the snake.  the story was going so well!Ouch

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 7:39pm | IP Logged
wndrfl updt
snakewa here Shocked

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 8:04pm | IP Logged
I loved the entire chapter, there is something about the way you write that makes me visualise the whole thing so easily.

I am glad that the positivity around him is giving him the opportunity to introspect and think about his life both professional and personal. 

I am glad he does not feel the pressure and stress of his personal life that had been having a negative impact and he is taking corrective steps. 

Thinking about his relationship with La and the uncommon grounds it was built on, making him realise why he was even in that relationship. And I am glad he decides to call it off with her given that both know it is not working out and is meeting the needs of neither. 
I am glad La takes it well. 

I am so glad he realises that she is indeed a distraction to him, realising that there is something about her that makes him think of her constantly and I liked it that this thought came in his mind when he was thinking about his relationship with La and how her absence in his life did not affect him like it should and in contrast to his thought about Khushi..

The pressure on her still strong from her evil and unscrupulous boss, but I keep getting more confident that she will handle him with brilliance when the time is correct .

The feeling of victory and the euphoria connected with it giving him a sense of contentment and his self esteem, which further reflects in his mood and disposition which eventually results in his lighthearted banter with Khushi.

 I like that he laughs with her and that their conversation is a step in the right direction, a personal one in which he gets to know more about her. I liked that she asks about Aman. I liked her confusion about how to address him , after that night in Calcutta...that was so natural. Given their relationship...I liked that she felt at ease with him though. A big step, 

Now who is this new person spying and warning her off  him and why ? 

Waiting for some action on the field and off...


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