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Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 (Page 104)

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
Fantastic update. I think you are doing a great job balancing the story in the cricket world and the world outside it. 

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 2:19pm | IP Logged
I can see why some may say there's too much description of the game but I think it's important. 
It has a significant bearing on Arnav's frame of mind. 
For me the longer the chapter the more for me to read!
Given Arnav's views of the media his relationship with Khushi can only progress slowly. I like the way you are showing how he is slowly opening up with her. 

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
Nice update

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
Un-resed my comment on Pg-104.

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
Wow... Loved it...is the stranger Shyam?

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 3:31pm | IP Logged
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First of all I take back my words of improving the pace of the story, as in one update it moved a lot. 

Arnav is out of the relationship with Lavanya. He admitted to himself that the thoughts of a woman who interrupted and distracted him was not his girlfriend but Khushi. 

As for Khushi, she find has the fluttering sensation in the region of her heart on seeing her laad governor smiling and he doesn't look like one while laughing or smiling.

They both continue to have a joviall chat, sharing personal info and laughing on private jokes. Surely they have moved a lot from their first encounter.

And the snake is here. Now what problem will he create and will it bring Arnav and Khushi closer...to find out we have to wait for you next update. Hmmm.


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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 4:36pm | IP Logged
amazing 

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Very good update...so lavanya and Arnav split up

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