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Arshi SS: Outside the Lines, Chp 12, Pg 140, link T2 pg 149 (Page 102)

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 4:40pm | IP Logged
I honestly love the balance you showing...between the two!
You write so well the pace is good too, I think it's coming to a point where their interactions are getting closer, which is amazing! I would love too see the attraction building!

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 6:04pm | IP Logged
Thank for the note,

It's nice of you to question the readers and ask for there feedback,

I personally have no complaints and think the story is a brilliant read and moving at a wonderful pace,

I will admit I'm not a huge fan of cricket (as you know I love my football) but I love reading how Arnav's cricket team is playing and improving in each update,

I was wanting more interaction between Arnav and Khushi but that's not a problem anymore as the last update we got too read a majority of the update on both of them having a wonderful conversation, 

The length of your updates are perfect and you always write long updates which is much appreciated, 

Eagerly waiting for the update xx 

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 6:46pm | IP Logged
I love the story totally, no complaints at all!!!!!
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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 10:50pm | IP Logged
Thumbs Up

Love the way you are proceeding.

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
I am really enjoying the story just the way it is !

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
I have one tiny issue Aami... Update quickly ya... Wink
I am absolutely loving this story... and the length of the chapters is good too...
have always love your style of writing... and I make it a point to appreciate it in my every comment... Aur koi doubt mat rakhna!! LOL Cricket and Arshi are in perfect balance and I am waiting desperately for Arnav to hit a six when Khushi and he set out on a romantic journey!! 

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Posted: 14 March 2014 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mints23

I have one tiny issue Aami... Update quickly ya... Wink
I am absolutely loving this story... and the length of the chapters is good too...
have always love your style of writing... and I make it a point to appreciate it in my every comment... Aur koi doubt mat rakhna!! LOL Cricket and Arshi are in perfect balance and I am waiting desperately for Arnav to hit a six when Khushi and he set out on a romantic journey!! 




Yes update quickly...and I want him to hit consecutive 6s and I wish he bowled too...I love when bowlers take a catch off their own bowling...Big smile

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 12:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vandana.sagar

Originally posted by mints23

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">I have one tiny issue Aami... Update quickly ya...Wink</font>
<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">I am absolutely loving this story... and the length of the chapters is good too...</font>
<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">have always love your style of writing... and I make it a point to appreciate it in my every comment... Aur koi doubt mat rakhna!!LOLCricket and Arshi are in perfect balance and I am waiting desperately for Arnav to hit a six when Khushi and he set out on a romantic journey!!
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Yes update quickly...and I want him to hit consecutive 6s and I wish he bowled too...I love when bowlers take a catch off their own bowling...Big smile


he can break Yuvi's Record by htting 7 consecutive 6's, 7th being the No-Ball.;)

and waiting for him to lead his side, as captianWink

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