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That was beautifully painful. I don't know how else to put it...the start was beautiful the kind that puts a smile on your face, the lovers fancy with little sadness but the end just breaks your heart. But still its beautiful! 

Great piece of writing that touches one's heart. Keep writing. :))

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Wow Deliah!Shocked
 I have to say the way you showed the depth of their emotions was truly beautiful!Thumbs Up
It was an amazing os to read, because the way you have written literally sucks the person into it, and I could literally imagine a couple like this doing this in my head. Like I could see an image of everything that you have written in my head!Smile
It was beautifully written!Star
I have just found out about Writer's Corner, and this was the first thing that I have read, and I am glad I did!Heart
If you ever do write more, do pm me!Approve

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oh. my. god. Absolutely awesome. I was so shocked at the end!
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