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ArHi SS: Fateful Love *Ch 4, pg 1 NOW* (New Thread Link pg 139) (Page 98)

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
I was thinking along the lines of this being a psychological thriller. But then the feather scene and the part mentioning Arnav's parents fighting, made me be doubt it. But...but...but, the last two lines creeped me out. Seriously! You scared me. I need to know what's happening sooon! 

The feather scene kind of reminded me of the last scene from '1408'. Have you seen that movie? 

It is updates like these that remind me how good you are and why I started reading your stories. You are really good! :D It takes a whole lot of skill to build up suspense. 

Keep it up! Clap

Edited by avantika_2012 - 10 September 2013 at 12:49pm

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
I am just freaked out and a bit scared as well, where's Khushi gone? Garima's motherly instincts r gonna make her realise soon that something is not right... Now u've got 3 amazing stories, all of them r equally interesting and I can't wait for the next updates.

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
awesome update
know one see khushi in year 1915 expect arnav
yhe became best friend
poor Arnav, what a terrible childhood he must have
loved the updte
continue soon

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
No one can see Khushi except for Arnav in 1914, I am happy:D
They have become best friends, they can't imagine their lives without each other, I am scared for them, don't know what future holds for them:(

But what is with feather mystery? How is it important? 

I have a feeling that Garima will soon come to know about Khushi and something bad will happen, she will send her to the doc may be..!!

Waiting for the next chapter eagerly:)

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
I am fascinated by this story.   just like Shameless was something different, this one is also another intriguing mystery to let our mind wander.  Are they 2 kids who have no one close to confide in and are letting their imaginations run wild by creating faked friends?  Or are they really crossing generations?  I guess the feather is the proof that both worlds exist.  It crossed over from Arnav's time right?  I mean Kushi's pillow was in one piece.  Love the concept, reminds of something I have seen or read about but it is not coming to mind.

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
This is my first time reading something like this and to be honest I was initially worried. I have always been able to relate to the emotion in your previous stories but I was actually wondering whether I will be able to do the same with this one because the basis for this story is so hard to believe. Im so so glad that I was worrying for nothing. Time gap or no time gap Arnav and Khushi are adorable together. The way they share their fears and worries , be it about school or their family is so wonderful that I almost forgot that they are from different time periods while reading.
 The most touching part of the story though was when Arnav became all sad thinking that there will be a time that him and everything around will not exist. And how Khushi has made it a mission to keep a part of him alive in  the present by cleaning up Sheesh Mahal.
Still have a lot of questions like where does Khushi actually go etc. Also Im guessing that since Garima found the feather, that means things can travel between time periods. 

It was a fabulous update. Thanks for the PMSmile

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
Thnx for d pm

Awesome updt.
Still intrigued by arnav n khushi meeting each other during the night yet nt anyone else is able to see khushi frm arnav's world n arnav frm khushi's world.
Arnav tho seeing khushi cry told her he believes her.
Garima cudnt see khushi missing.
Also their friendship hs evolved over time.
Khushi trying to safeguard everythng tht belongs to arnav n make sure she gets sheesh mahal bck to its glory.
Arnav's words to khushi to nt leave coz he cnt live without her reminded of ipk.

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
Woowww i am sooo loving it...i have no idea how u come up with such superb ideas...first Mg nd then fateful love...its totally beyond my imagination...i was confused of how she got to see him while sleeping...on her own bed...but now thats cleared...::)))
Am sure this ff has a long way to go...(i hope so)

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