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ArHi SS: Fateful Love *Ch 4, pg 1 NOW* (New Thread Link pg 139) (Page 97)

roshaan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 2:33am | IP Logged
qwesum updqte loved it till now its very confusing but allot interesting cant wait to read more

Anamika100 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 4:04am | IP Logged
This is so intriguing.  I think Arnav and Khushi are just adorable in how accepting of each other they are.  As if they met to help each other survive.
The white feather will be connecting the past and present...don't know how but it will prove to Lhushi that she is not imagining things.  
sana48 Goldie

Joined: 03 April 2013
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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 4:50am | IP Logged
Awesome update... Wink
different dimensions... interesting... Smile
Love it... Heart
pmehra300 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 4:50am | IP Logged
Brilliant chapter
Loved it
It was amazing. ...
Where did khushi go??????

sarunarshi72 Goldie

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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 5:15am | IP Logged
brilliant concept. Plz continue soon. Love it
Diva_Akorshi IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 14813

Posted: 12 September 2013 at 6:10am | IP Logged
doctor saheba Heart u a lot...
every update u really surprise me...
u have amazing skill of writing...
sorry fr late i was busy wid my office work...
today got some free time m here to read...

update was superb...
arnav n khushi only can see each other no one other can...
they r settled wid their time shift...LOL
khushi was afraid arnav won't believe her...
but khushi's tears melt arnav...
khushi become normal now...
garima happy to see khushi happy...
day by day arnav n khushi become more n more close...
they r bestie...Tongue
they can't imagine their life widout each other...Big smile
khushi trying her best to discover the time spell...
she is doing more cleaning...
the ear covering scene was too too much lovely...
loved it...

precap nice...
update soon...

arkhushi1 Groupbie

Joined: 28 February 2012
Posts: 117

Posted: 12 September 2013 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Loved this update.

So Khushi is able to go back in time but Arnav cannot travel to the future. She physically leaves her own time, yes? Hence the need for pillows and doll's hair. I must say, that was rather spooky. How will she ever explain her disappearance when Garima discovers her gone? Garima already thinks Khushi needs psychological help!

The friendship between Arnav and Khushi is blossoming into a really strong one where they are beginning to depend on each other, where they cannot imagine the other not being there. I hope it works out for them. Tina you have to make sure that they will be together, pleeease.

The covering of the ears was such a cute scene, as was Khushi working to try to restore Sheesh Mahal to some of it's former glory, just because Arnav was upset to hear what state it has become now. I think the feather is significant to show Khushi that she is not imagining things but also maybe somehow Arnav could also come into Khushi's time, if the feather can come into the future, why not Arnav? I'm rambling now, I think In will stop. Anyway love your story Tina, thank you for the PM.

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..tora.tangled. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 1:18pm | IP Logged

Hey tinaBig smile

I know I haven't commented of late but I have followed each update...and I wanted to post a long comment which wasn't possible through mobile and my lappy was having net well, I was absent...Embarrassed

Ok, now coming to the's marvelous!!! And there is that sense of mystery again which I so love in your writings...makes things so much more interesting!!! I'm so interested to see where this goes...arnav and khushi in two different times, he is like a phantom in her time and she is like a phantom in his...but then again, how is it that only they can see each other??? Something is not right...again that mystery...

And is there any significance between the dates of their times coinciding? I mean, their school started on the same do both the years have the same calendar? Does it hold any significance?Confused

I love the friendship and strong bond blossoming between aranv and khushi despite the difference in time...but I feel sad for must it feel knowing that the people you love, the home you live in will one day disappear in the sands of time? I mean, we all know that...but still khushi is living proof to him how times change...Ouch

But are things changing now? Because..during that pillow fight in arnav's time, a feather escaped into khushi's time? How did that happen? And khushi really time travels..i mean she goes into the's all so messed up...I still can't figure the real matter out...Tongue

I love love love this story already..can't wait for more khushi's past in some way related to arnav's family? Or maybe, arnav's future?? I know I may sound confusing here...but that's all that is in my head..LOL

And brilliant way of writing..keep it up!!Clap

p.s. I can't wait for the ebook really!!



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