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ArHi SS: Fateful Love *Ch 4, pg 1 NOW* (New Thread Link pg 139) (Page 67)

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 7:07am | IP Logged

nice chapter

so Arnavs family told him the same he is imagining her
awww poor Arnav she is his only friend
khushis a smart girl to have figured out that its time difference already
wonder if only Arnav will be able to see her then at night or will others??? Also curious to know if she can come to his time can he go to hers????
looking forward to story unfolding n getting to see if they can ever find a way to be together in the daytime
thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Nice update!
It is an amazing concept.  

So far, it seems as if they crossed the time boundaries and only both of them can see each other.  While Khushi lives 100 years ahead of Arnav, she can see the younger version at night, while the older version's picture is in the library.  This though just saddens me because it means something really bad happened in-between, that caused Arnav to harden greatly while leaving the Sheesh Mahal for good.

Wow!

Please update soon!  I really want to know the whole truth and how it even happened.

Thanks!!!!

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 1:23am | IP Logged
WOW! This seems interesting! :D 

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Posted: 05 September 2013 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
Omg this is damn interesting
I have a question...how will arshi be together despite the time difference?

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Posted: 06 September 2013 at 4:59am | IP Logged
Seriously Tina this story has caught up my mind completely, with me trying to figure out why is this happening so? A Time travel of a 100 years...I guess its Khushi going a 100 years back in time...but y only at night time? Now it's a love story for sure & u always promise happy endings to ur work but in this I can't decipher how can they have a happy endingunless ofcourse there's a reincarnation of Arnav too...I'm really interested to read how u proceed with this story bcos it has made me all curious...too many questions in my mind...I'm waiting to read the next update where u explore & explain Khushi's psychology

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Posted: 06 September 2013 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
Chaper two..
 
Awww.. how much she wanted to see Arnav the next morning.. and how her heart knew it already he wasnt there.. they are going to be hopelessly in love in no time.. its so easy to jusge now..
Awww.. she got sad because she couldnt see him.. OuchOuch
 
I seriously felt bad when noone seriously considered her sincere words,,
hell she wasnt making up anything.. true she beahve weird sometimes.. and thats beacuse she has been thru so much at such a tender age.. why doest Garima considers that..
Different people have different ways to cope up with the sorrows in their lives..
Agreed Khushi is different and so are her ways... but its not her fault.. beacuse she feels everything too deeply from her heart...
 
I just wish she stays strong.. theres so much she will be needed to handle..Smile
 
the moment she saw that portrait of Arnav's in the library.. she could feel the connection..
and she felt comforted leaning against it.. Big smile
thats the beauty of love.. Smile
 
Tina the last part actually frightened me.. when all of a sudden Arnav appeared..
it scared me a bit.. honestly..
but then it all became clear..
Arnav';s condition was no better than her..
both of them were dying to see each other.. Awww.. poor them..
shit.. a gap of hundred years..
hows they going to overcome this..
Its such a fateful love..
If only this time would help their love this time..
 
continue soon dear..
eagerly waiting for the next update.. Big smile
 

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Posted: 07 September 2013 at 6:37pm | IP Logged
Hi FL readers,
Loved your comments thus far Day Dreaming  I know that this is the type of story that as a reader you want quick updates on--i totally get that.

That's my plan for this one as well. But I was caught up with my bday this weekend (thanks for all the bday wishes btw, very sweet of u allEmbarrassed)

The update will be posted in a reasonable time, perhaps Monday US Central Time or earlier.

A word about the length that so many of u mentioned in your comments (esp ShellSmile): yes this is a SS. Simply bc I didn't think it would take me very long to write out my crazy dream. But it is taking more time than I expected because you all need to understand the story really well (unlike dreams where u just 'get' certain things). I've deliberately written FL in a suspenseful and confusing manner but things will get more clear with time (there's that key word again Wink)
That being said, I will keep writing FL until I think it is complete. I still don't think it will be as long as DH or SP, but roughly 10-15 chapters instead.

See you all soon!

-tina


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Posted: 07 September 2013 at 6:48pm | IP Logged
Update soon! I'll be waiting! Embarrassed

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