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ArHi SS: Fateful Love *Ch 4, pg 1 NOW* (New Thread Link pg 139) (Page 41)

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awesome concept and update plz update soon

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NOTE: PMs will be sent out later. I have Desert Heat's update all done but IF has some glitch and none of the quotation marks are showing up. I went through this chapter of Fateful Love and added them all in but DH is a lot longer. So I'll wait awhile and hopefully the issue is resolved by IF.

Coming to this chapter..
Confused still? Hopefully as the story unravels, more things start to fall into place. I tried to explore Khushi's psychological side in this chapter. She's not a typical 9 yr old, but someone who has gone through a life-changing tragedy.

So like I said, this is not a ghost story--but a time travel love story. I don't think this genre has been done on ArHi before, correct me if Im wrong. I didn't write this because its so different, but because I loved this story and couldn't stop myself from writing it down. I just hope it strikes a chord somewhere with at least some of you.

Precap

Chapter 3: Best Friends


Questions since some asked: What two events does the opening chapter pic foreshadow? Is Garima right--does Khushi need professional help? Or is she handling her sorrow appropriately for her age?





Edited by TINA! - 24 August 2013 at 12:27pm

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 10:07am | IP Logged
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yups i am first...

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 10:07am | IP Logged
Hell I am Alone in my room...1 A.m and i am scared...Haae Allah...Ouch


This Made me a bit scared but then as the chapter unraveled  I was easy..so its a time difference but still a thriller..I was wondering where did he go??
and Now I am thinkng someone is sitting on front bed or hiding in the cupboard  *nail biting*Dead

Well Khushi Has some psychological Side for sure becoz of her past and also a girl who,at the age of Just 9 ,can guess that its some time difference..Has got something Mann!!!
But my question is also the same that Is it because her parents passed at such a small age..
Is She Imagining Her Own Characters as she was told about raizadas who used to live here..I guess yes as you said its Not A ghost story pand tbh 100 years later..only Bhootwas can come and at no cost i want my arnavto be a ghost Cry
#Just Asking "Does it have a relation with medical LOL..tell tell Doctor?"WinkWink

TINA if this is the story you have conceived after watching just a DREAM ,Girl you needto sleep more...your dreams are sooo intellectual..i wonder how are you in reality ?Big smileBig smile



Edited by mbbsrocks - 24 August 2013 at 2:10pm

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 10:16am | IP Logged
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Whoa...

That was amazing Doc ji..

Its almost 12am here..and I was checking my surroundings while reading this chapterLOL
Okay you got me this time.. I swear I was little scared..because I am home alone with Abhi..Hayyoo..

So both are real and they are already bonding with each other like long lost friends..

Okay I am really confused now.. Time travel..it is... hmm.. I wonder who is travelling to whom.

Now I got the prologue as why their families were against their love. 

This is fresh genre Doc ji and I have never read anything like this on ArHi yet.

I think this is going to cross the mischief created by  "Shameless" 
truly wonderful and a fresh/rare concept by any author on IF! Bang on Wink

You are great and awesome..

Cant wait for the next part.

And ya I got to the first page for the first time... Not a bad day at all.. hehhheee


Edited by Sarunfanatic_Ji - 24 August 2013 at 12:28pm

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 11:25am | IP Logged
they are from different time... wow! amazing...

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 11:29am | IP Logged
awesome update
time travel love story
very differnt story
slowely they became bestfriend intresting
& also khushi had some  psychologically problem
cant wait to see what happed next
Already waiting for next chapter...
continue soon



Edited by rupamudra - 25 August 2013 at 12:18pm

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