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ArHi SS: Fateful Love *Ch 4, pg 1 NOW* (New Thread Link pg 139) (Page 41)

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
Ooohhh...A Time Travel love story. Very interesting concept. Loved the chapter. Looking forward to the next one.

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
trust me when I say this..when I read the first chapter, it gave me a creepy feeling, an unknown sensation ran down my spine and I hd numerous questions in my mind till I read the 2nd chap. after 2nd chap I ws like wat the!! its a time travel story!! hey clear one doubt na... the morning is present..I mean 2013.. nd night is 1914??? I mean w.r.t. Khushi's pov?? loved loved loved it Tina!! I salute you!! I will be eagerly waiting for the next updates..please don't torture ur readers k??

love
Priyo!

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by munam_13

trust me when I say this..when I read the first chapter, it gave me a creepy feeling, an unknown sensation ran down my spine and I hd numerous questions in my mind till I read the 2nd chap. after 2nd chap I ws like wat the!! its a time travel story!! hey clear one doubt na... the morning is present..I mean 2013.. nd night is 1914??? I mean w.r.t. Khushi's pov?? loved loved loved it Tina!! I salute you!! I will be eagerly waiting for the next updates..please don't torture ur readers k??

love
Priyo!

yes--exactly hunSmile

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
Tey belong to different centuries Shocked
Dont knw why.. While reading the lines wre arnav was tr in room speakg n nt a pleasant tone , and al she did was flung herself over him nd etc. . I felt hes pain,al day she was questng herself wile her heart knew the answer ,he s ri8 b4 her nd unknowingly i was shedding tears. .
Jus imagined the future of d story tey adjustd to the fact of ly n8 tym. . Cos tey need each other, bt tat cannot b d same r go wel wit otr family members to6 ri8. . May b tats d pbm tey r facing nd ll b thinking about. .(as by teaser) Bt Watevr centuries tey belong to, arnav aur khushi ek saath hi rahenge. . Day Dreaming
Advans thanx fo d pm. . So eager to read the nxt . .
Ofcourse its different interesting and lovely dammit !



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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 12:38pm | IP Logged


Can I say that this is the BEST story of yours till date? Very creative concept!

I follow your writing on and off,  and this one is so different from what you usually write, yet you feel so at ease with this genre. 

This one has me hooked. It's different and it's shaping up interestingly. Shall wait to read further updates eagerly :)


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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
a time travel story...u r just amazing...and this story is a result of a vivid dream ...u amaze with ur unique concepts...
am more than eager to c hw u take this story ahead...

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Well was not expecting this...! Sounds like an interesting plot... and I would love to read how the story progresses. .. Smile
Kinda felt bad for Khushi... I know Garima is concerned but she could have dealt with it better... especially if she thinks that Khushi needs help, then she should handle Khushi carefully. ..

Thanks for the PMSmile

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
OMG! This is creepy...
both can see each other only in the night..and the sheesh Mahal magically transforms itself to its impeccable self from more than a hundred years back...
and the best thing is they both co exist at the same time...
my head is reeling under the effects now... 
So the story will continue in this way? Until they grow up and fall in love? Which is why the prologue?
I'm flabbergasted...Shit! What next?

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